Here's the original in case anyone wants to compare: https://e-hentai.org/g/983939/b33a65a6b1/

The title roughly translates to "Yuyuko-sama is a devoted and doting wife".

At first i wanted to whine about the font and the lacking quality in the text,
but then i realized that the work is ruined by mosaic censorship, so not expending too much effort on it makes sense.
No need to perfect what is already ruined as they say. FUCK YOU JAPANESE RETARD LAWS

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Who wouldn't want to marry her... she's a perfect example of a wife!

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Fuck that font is making my eyes bleed!
Dude wtf is wrong with you? Why would you do this?

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Guys, we don't fap to fonts. Let's not comment on that and rather on how great the art and the fucking are

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Just in time for Valentines

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My Feelings. So Lonely..

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First i wanted to fap, then i wanted to complain about font, now... SO VANILA, SO NICE STORY!
P.S. it was so nice, that i forgot to fap or complain

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The font choice and typesetting could use some improvements, and the dialogue could use a little bit of work, but the translation is accurate.

And damn, that is a fine ass on a fine-ass woman.

edit: Good standard-fare typesetting tips can be found here. http://prettyanonymo.us/index.php/scanlation-resources/anonblacks-typesetting-guide/
My personal suggestion would be Wild Words or Anime Ace for normal dialogue, Augie for the stuff you see floating around outside word balloons, and beyond that to be creative with font choices.

Last edited on 21 February 2017, 09:53.

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I'll have what he's having.

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That font made me lose my erection

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A choice for the font was very questionable; this doujin however is not. Ultra-vanilla goodness with a very soft ghost.

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Translator here. Since the complaints seem to be about the font: I'm actually not sure what font works best for these sort of things. Last time I did this was plain Arial, so I guess I should stick to that instead of Corbel? I remember a lot of people complained about stuff like Comic Sans, though I sort of wanted to use that instead. I'd appreciate suggestions on this because I'm honestly at a loss. I was expecting more complaints about the translation itself rather than the font. >.>;

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handraw the font in ms paint.

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@Moroboshi Yuumei
I've always heard Wild Words suggested as the basic font for typesetting. It's not going to be perfect and there are probably better options out there, but no one is going to complain about it.

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It's less about the translation, and more about how the font makes this look like a rewrite.

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ITT: [autistic screeching about typefonts instead of paying attention to the plot]

This made my Valentine's Day

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Wow, I don't think I've used the word perfect and meant it as much as I do right now, but... What a perfect housewife.

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We really need a "Pregnant Sex" Tag, to enable filtering out all these Doujin/Manga/etc. with just a single pregnant image at the very end. Not that I'm saying that they're bad or anything, just that when I go looking for "Pregnant" content, I'm looking for something that actually contains pregnant content.

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@Moroboshi Yuumei
Here's a guide I've used before. It tells you the do and don'ts of typsesetting.
http://prettyanonymo.us/wp-content/uploads/2014/01/typesettingguide101.png

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@Translator
Your translation is fine. Direct translations do not work. The dialogue seemed natural for the work and the setting. The typesetting needs work, though. That said, I don't expect 1 person to get it all perfect, there's usually multiple people handling different aspects of the work.

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@hjerry
This gallery is just wrong tagged.
"Pregnant" should be tagged only if there more then 25% images contains pregnant sex activities.
If it is only in the last page than gallery should have tag "impregnation".

Downvote "pregnant" tag here, please.

https://ehwiki.org/wiki/pregnant
>Remember the presence rule. Should not be tagged if a person is simply shown as pregnant in the last pages of a story, nor is it to be used in place of impregnation.
>more than 25% would be sufficient for tagging

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@chen_yakumo
While I agree with you on the wrong tagging, this is a prevalent issue for the pregnant tag. Do a search for "pregnant" and a large portion (maybe even most) of your findings will only contain a single image at the end. That's why I suggested a new tag, since most who see pregnant, attach the tag, no matter how few images contain it.

Sorry if I've hijacked the comments here, didn't really mean to. It just came to mind this time around is all.

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p5

When the main character's face must NOT be revelated. No matter what.

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