RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/97129/81be08e165/

Heh, looking at the cover I first thought it's a yaoi pairing of some kind :)

But... the gallery is a weird mess. Where is the cover from? The translation seems to be pages 30-61 from https://e-hentai.org/g/97129/81be08e165/, indeed, but then you have thrown in what seems to be a collection of random images from ? You also translated pages 77 and 80 from that dojin, but you didn't translate the other credit pages, etc.

Don't get me wrong, it's nice to see anything translated, and you did a good job, but by mixing it with random images, you created a mess, for renaming and sourcing. It would be better to upload this stuff as two separate galleries: one for the dojin, and another one as an imageset. You can link them from description if you want.

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Ilie this translation, mosty because I like Dragongall. It's a bit cut and paste together. I agree with Red: better to upload it as different galleries. But the artwork is good, true to the original. Thanks for this anyway.

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@Red_Piotrus Hmm, yeah, that would've been the better option probably. The cover I made by cropping the image from page 59, and editing it into the cover style of Garland's other doujins. I had found the original cover for the Gohan and Videl doujin, but it was so low quality that I couldn't clean it up.

When I get some free time I'll see if I can split up the galleries and post the other credit pages. I could've sworn I had put them in a folder with the others while editing this, but I suppose not.

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Awesome. It's "appreciate" on page4.

@Red_Piotrus: I think the idea is to make this a Videl-party of fapping. I kinda like the end result here with what seems a main story and a bunch of omake illustrations in the end.

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"Ah, she's in pain" :(
"Hyaaaaaaaaaaaa" >:O *thrusts deeper*

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You'll probably have to take the Indicative

Lol

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You should make it clear in the title and tags that this is a rewrite.

I'm familiar with the original Japanese text and these translations are inaccurate in parts; it appears you have taken some artistic liberties.

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@ Super Saiyan I have. I mention that in the editor's note, but the tag's been added to reflect that.

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Old but gold

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you retard

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