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English is not my first language, so if you see any error in any text please tell me how to write it correctly so I can fix it, thanks.

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Don't worry too much about language; as long as it's not horrendous, it's still fappable :P There aren't any significant mistakes, but some of the phrasings are awkward (not many people would actually say it that certain way), but everyone here comes here for the art, not the writing (most of the time :P). Speaking of art, your style is fantastic. If you keep up this quality for future updates, people will start to notice it and support you! I can't do much for you in terms of monetary support, but you have my full moral support!

Keep up the good work!

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I like how this story goes, yet why haven't you updated Naruto Hokage?

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