my version of this AOI HITORI master piece.

It's my first rewrite in english, i do that in french originaly.
so please be indulgent.
I do that cause too less HITORI's are translaten.

if comments are good, i'll do more.

see ya.

i just love those guys who rate your work ONESTAR only one minute after i publish it.
Fast Reader indeed.

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What do you expect?
Nobody is going to praise you for rewrite.
Almost everybody see it as a disrespect to the author of manga.
Hate me all you want, but that's how it is.

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No torrents?

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eric0contact, thanks for the translation
ElectroYume, "almost everybody", that's right - "almost" is the key word, those kind of words are disrespectful to the uploader.

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Respect for the work you have put in. Alas this is the world we live in. Pls don't do it anymore.

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Thanks for the rewrite! Years wanting to know more about this story.

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Its better than nothing. There no better scans-group atm, so will stick with this one.

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What's with all the hate for rewrites? It's just based on a french translation, isn't it? I'll take a two step translation over nothing.

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The french one is his own rewrite too...

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A rewrite in the year 2017. What a world we live in.

If there's no proper translation of this then I'd love to see one. Actually I could say that about all of Aoi Hitori's work.

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Hi everyone.
what did I expect?.... hmmm well . A good translation i think.

but you know what? look at the first page of Egalleries, what's been translaten : lolishit, bad drawers, awfull annoying stories, even fury. Yeah, fury... no, seriously???
So by the time TranslationTeams put their talent to do those "works" , i choose to put words on a real artist, and to make him readable for those who dont speak japanese, me first.

so yeah it's a rewrite.Some find it disrespectful, I think it's the opposite. When there will be good translations of it, i'll erase my work.
But I have at least ten work of Aoi Hitori untranslaten, and some from 2010 !!! Since that time, I thought somebody would have tranlate it , No?...

So what do I do : I leave untranslaten works unknown for years again, or I share my little bad stuff with all?.

After reading comments, in french and english, looks like I'll keep it for myself.
special thanks to those who liked or not, but said it respectfully.
@Otaku1 thank you ,seriously, THAT is respect.
goodbye.

Last edited on 29 March 2017, 09:24.

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Good, keep it for yourself. We don't need half-assed shit. If you want to put in the time and effort for a proper translation then you will be praised for it. But rewrites have been and will always be SHIT. Don't post them and don't expect praise when you do so. Better to leave it un-translated that deal with some random's fanfiction.

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does not mean I don't like it, but I don't hate it

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@eric0contact: Just a side note, leaving the whole rewrite thing apart. The fact you don't like the particular kind of works, fetishes etc. doesn't mean they are all instantly inferior, worthless and shit, as you label it. I too find here lot of content that is in most cases instant turn off for me, but I simply avoid what I don't like, knowing it's just not my thing (poor art quality is something different, but still no reason for hate speech for me). There are translated works with loli, bestiality, guro... so what? That's the idea behind e-hentai /sister site for more extreme content/, for everyone to find what they like. You are facing here hate against rewrites, and in your defense you "by the way" unleash hate upon something else... That won't gain you popularity here.

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I apologize sincerely to:

-Hentai fans whom i did offense by doing a rewrite.

- the above-mentionned-styles (by me) that i didnt wanted to mentioned as inferior, but just explain a certain point of surprise to find tons of works translated and not one of the best drawers.
I didnt mean to judge anyone, well, lol : im here no?

-and again to hentai fans i did offense by being too poor to commission and too ignorant to translate it myself.

I'll go on, whether some like or not ;-) but I get the point : wont read comments... ha ha.

see ya.

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if you are going to post a re-write at least link the original, even if it's the RAW version

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