A tribute to the fantastic Tokubousentai Dinaranger by monmon. This is my first work. Enjoy!

p.15 is not good, dude! I'd suggest you change p.15. You know what I mean.

Edit: Thanks for deleting it.

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Awesome work. I hope to see more Dinaranger-esque work.

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This story is very good, looking forward to the future can become a series of stories.

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致敬特防部队？

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Amazing! Thank you for doing Dinaranger stuff, we miss it so much.
As your first work, it is very good! I will keep an eye on your future works!

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Oooo! Nice :) I would love to see more Dinaranger stuff too <3

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Amazing work, very nice. Please do more Dina ranger work.

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Love it <3

(It made me remember how much I want to know the ending of that work tough XD )

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Belt magically appears in image 4 but is absent from images 2 and 3, good work overall, just something you might wanna look into

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Dinaranger absolutely needs more love. I hope you'll revisit this in the future.

What I love:
- The ZOFA bodysuit design is absolutely fantastic; the gloves, boots, and belt are all there, and I love the glossy lighting on them.
- You actually show the ZOFA Cells spreading over Maya's body like a liquid, instead of using some other weird effect.
- The blowjob panels are incredible, with the goo splashing up onto her cheeks, the trail of semen on the dick, and Maya's ahegao, complete with gooey strands.

What I want to see improved:
- I wish the bodysuit itself was a little more glossy. Not as much as the boots and gloves, but still shinier than it is now.
- I don't like that the boots are wrinkled; they should be just as form-fitting as the gloves are.
- The ZOFA Soldiers' ears still look like human ears; it would be great if they turned into shapeless orifices like in the original doujin.
- There should be something on the ZOFA Soldiers' forehead, if not a physical emblem, then at least a tattoo of some kind; a blank forehead unbalances the design.

Things from the original doujin I want to see you try (eventually):
- More types of sex acts, of course.
- I'd like you to try doing the thing where strands of ZOFA Cells leap into the nipples.
- Tentacles, like the ones in Chapters 7-8.
- Some inner-body shots, particularly showing ways in which the ZOFA Cells coating the inside of the throat, vagina, and intestines.

BTW, what was in the deleted page 15?
EDIT: Ah, I see the problem. I get what the intent was, but I agree that the execution was horribly botched. If you want to take another crack at the salute panel, I recommend you reference the two-page-spread climax shot of Chapter 14, and try modeling it after that instead. Maya does a kinda Nazi-like salute in that one too, but her arm is cut off by the page's edge so you can't see her hand, and she's also squatting and sporting an ahegao, both of which draw attention away from the salute.

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@misterlemon Dina Ranger series always had a whole salute to the enemy thing going on when they were converted... but you could see their faces with the brainwashing, in this it's more of a SigHeil approach (check the parent post) that's why he was asked to remove page 15.

edit: i wouldn't mind seeing more scenes of added corruption, it feels like the whole penis bit was too fast and boom done... we know from previous dina's that it took a ltitle bit to corrupt someone but the penis was the final acceptance and even after that it was still repeated.

Last edited on 11 April 2017, 05:59.

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like Dinaranger?= =

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technical question: from what outfit is the belt from? no belt i have is rounded like that, and i like how it looks that way.

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Oh very impressive, I would really like to see this expanded and continued. Great job!

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does anyone have the supposed image 15? if its part of the set, why remove it? we've seen extreme gore, scat, even furry. but a roman salute is TOO MUCH?

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