Rewrote the story a little, to fill it out. Some pages have changed text but context is the same/similar.

Change the font and typesettings (I presume changing to textboxes is a typesetting thing?)

My english translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/1050622/ed464a1c74/
Original Japanese with no-text: https://e-hentai.org/g/1048842/53081433d4/

你是喜欢看本子的friends吗？

Base +5, XTY654 +4, asdfg1212 +1, ojun +6, jfragrettel +8, unknownshadows +5, rogerhippo +6, Blizzard010 +1

是有根大棒的friends呢

Base +4, jfragrettel +8, unknownshadows +5

必须差评

Base +6, jfragrettel +8, unknownshadows +5, rogerhippo +6

I never understood all this rewrite shit, really messes the search of -translated

Base +6, narach +7, Chronas +7, Rubba +7, maskulin4 +6, amurec80 +6, jfragrettel +8, unknownshadows +5, CyberZero +10, Traze +6, errata -6, Chilean_Guy +6, ani9000 -6

what i never understood is why they insist that a human girl wearing a costume with cat ears and a cat tail counts as cat girl?!? its a fucking costume so she is not a cat girl! also this is clearly a chick in a costume as you can see she has human ears in the first pic!

Base +6, rogerhippo +6, MedNed +6, ani9000 -6, Glovelove. -7, qwertzy12 -10

Pro tip for all you rewrite haters Search: -rewrite

Now you can't complain about rewrites clogging your searches.

Base +7, errata +6, MedNed -6, diooid -5, MeloTheYellow -6, ani9000 +6, kirbylogo +8

可以的，这很Friends

Base +1