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Is this the end? or will there be more? or will mark get tortured even more?

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Instead of feeling bad over this journey, I can't help but laugh.

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Best ending: Mr Orlov shot this chinese dude (who cares about his name anyways, he doesnt have a personality to deserve a name), and Hannah just stand with a blank face.
Or we can watch their wedding, their honeymoon, their doctor visits, their 70yo sex life.
Still decent tho, keep it coming!

2faggotop Yeah, thats pretty hilarious

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Arnav, theres more, chapter 15 was released on patreon.

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Vypress We've already seen Mark lose his wife in such a humiliating way. Now we are gonna see his suffering prolonged. Wow... Talk about sadistic...

Last edited on 03 May 2017, 06:02.

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sooo boooring

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@faggotop
I sorta agree. NTR just makes me laugh and this story had good build up to her betrayal.

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This really should have ended much faster. Like 5 chapters ago at most.

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@wasserman @jimbo_extreme exactly. It started out good but now things are starting to become repetitive, boring & predictable.

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Hahaha sry but that didnt even startet good. In one of the first 5 chapters i already said that this would happen. That Hannah in the end fucks Orlov and insults Mark in the meantime. And to the guys who say they like Hannah, that her character has grown so much (yeah true she is a dick obsessed bimbo who dont even bother to hurt her former Husband in such a sadistic way, thats some character grow) and thats no Brainwash or that they like Orlorv and said around chapter 7 or so that this is not the end and the big climax is still to come. There you have it. Around chapter 3 or 4 you already saw how this will end. Sry for the Autor but its just the lsame lame Netorare Stuff that has every Hentai, Doujin and 3d porn. It always goes exactly the same way as it goes here.
Well now to Mark. Ok he made a mistake at the beginning but he didnt deserve THAT. But i need to say as Hannah came back to him to play this nice game with him (sry but for me she is lower then trash and the same goes for Orlov) he should have kicked her out. It was so foreshadowing that this would happen. I mean he saw eveything and still she choose Orlovö. And after that he really gave her a second chance? At this point he really was an idiot. So what should he do now? Well his life is over. After that shit you will never again be able to form a deep bond to another person because everytime when she is late or doesnt recall you think that she is doing the same like Hannah and this way your jealuse will kill the relationship. So he should have buy a gun, find when and where the wedding is, go there and shot orlovs dick and balls away, then Hannahs knees and elboves and then shoot himself in the Head. Ok now the wedding is already over so same plan diferent location. At least that would be what i would do. Make that asshole at least impotant in any way (well maybe he would die wouldnt be a problem either) and would turn Hannahin into such an ugly thing that no one ever again want to touch her. This way i could really die in peace and even happy because both of them get exactly what they deserve.
So now to the Pro Netorare faction. Please tell me how can you like such storys? I mean do you think you where the guy who steals the woman? Because you should know that will never be the case. Most of the Time this are guys with a lot of money, a lot of good connections or both. And that doesnt appear to lets say 80-90% of all people around the world. Or would you really like to be in the mosition of Mark? I dont know how anyone really want to be in his possition. Alone this Chapter is a bigger Torture for any man who loves his Wife or girlfriend then any physical Torture. Because something like this here will never heal. And because the chapter didnt show THE END i guess there will come more and it will only show how Mark get Tortured more or maybe even dies because of this.

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