This is my first release, and first time cleaning/typesetting. You could also say it's my first time translating Japanese, but I've been reading it for some time now. Some of the cleaning on the thought bubbles is rough, but overall I think this came out nicely.

This guys objectives and goals considering he has a hypnosis machine are pretty pathetic.
Turn the step sister into perfect wife material, get rich and maintain a decent sized harem of hot bitches on the side. That's what I'd be doin

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First time reading this I though his balls were the hypnosis device like the bigger his balls were the more powerful the effect became.

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There's just one perhaps simple, perhaps glaring flaw in his idea. Why would most women follow a total stranger (maybe slight acquaintance if he knows them) into a bathroom / toilet ?

A keyword phrase to activate that state of mind would be better and so on, but we need information on what kind of hypnotic device it is.

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I was hoping it would turn out that the hypnosis didn't actually work but she just pretended it did.

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Is page 40 actually from one of his doujins, or is it just an extra page to this?

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Hope you'll translate more Zealous Idol!

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6 comments and not a single "thank you" or gratitude for his first attempt ...
So as a first person here i would like to thank you for your effort and i hope to see more stuff in future :)

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The big flaw on the plot is not realy following the clearly antisocial / shady guy into a random ass toilet but that hypnosis doesn't work like this... if you order something to somebody that would never do under any circunstance cause it would normaly be consider agaisnt her moral code or that the person knows to be ilegal she just will not do it. Simple as that. It has to be something harmless and you need to prepare the person for at least 45 - 60 minutes before you can attempt the hypnosis and it's never a guaranteed thing. So yeah the idea of the instant hypnothingy-magic sounds cool but it's just fap material without any kind of scientific base. Just so you guys know :P

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Some small tips for your future edits:
The stepsister's font is horrible, never use one like that for manga translations. The other font is fine.
Look into leveling and try to rotate and crop the scans if they are as bad as these.

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Judging from page 8/9, something happens before the target enters the bathroom. It seems like just seeing the bathroom is enough. She goes quiet and gets that vacant look in her eye before she actually steps inside.

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Nice work. We can never have enough SnO translated.

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Good job for your first work and thanks for uploading. I also felt it was a stupid idea for the brother to make the girls into meat toilets, I mean first of all, he would have to take girls into the bathroom and second of all is that it was the men's bathroom, so what would happen if a guy walks in on them? Since the girls are ordered to be meat toilet then they'll just have sex with anyone. The brother let his dick do the thinking instead of his brain. Seriosuly most of us here can think of so many flaws with his hypnotism.

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The girl is nice but holy shit the MC is obnoxious. Kinda ruin the read.

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求汉化(･∀･)

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Sex through the front slit in briefs? What the hell for?

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Ugh...I wish he'd stop saying the word "meat toilet". What a turn off.

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