Heya, I'm Oni, the creator of this comic right here. This has been a long time Patreon project of mine, telling the story of my original characters

For anyone interest in supporting the comic, Please check out my Patreon here!

https://www.patreon.com/onigashima

I also give out uncensored pages and Concept art as reward for my Patron

or if you want to do a one-time donation you can also do so right here:

https://twitch.streamlabs.com/onigensou

...or if you just want to give me mental support, feel free to leave your thought and comment in this gallery! ^ ^

Great art and the story is good too. Good luck to you in the future.

Base +7

GOOD manga-inspired art? In MY western comics?

Base +8, MaouMaou +9, mellowjello +8

The thought of not being able to tell the difference between western comics and manga by art alone is both terrifying and arousing.

Base +6, fidazzle +8, MaouMaou +9, Ayasesama +7, qazzy5 +22, Lulzylulz +10, Kaoknight +7, mellowjello +8

Art is nice.

Base +8

Great art paired with a glimpse on a cool story.. I say yes !

Base +1

Pretty interesting start, mate.
And it has the polish of a serialized manga, in that I would have believed it if someone had told me this was the first chapter of a new series.

Base +5

@hafini
Thank you very much! and thank you giving my work a read!

@sagematt
Well, I'm from the east, but not Japan though haha

@teijong
I'm interest in your choice of words here

@Horo
Thank you!

@raludo
hehe, thanks! I hope you stick around for the later chapter also

@arcnion
Yay! Thank you for your compliment, I'll work hard for the later chapters as well! please look forward to it!

Base +6, Kaoknight +7, mellowjello +8

Please don't do this
Ah
...
It's a typsetter error on the scanlation because of tiny balloons. It's obvious you are in charge of drawing the word balloons.

Do it normally like Ah...

Base +7, mellowjello +8

@front row
Oh, Alright, I didn't know that before, I'll keep it in mind in the future, Thank you!
...and sorry for the inconvenience ^ ^

Base +6, mellowjello +8

>it's an original English "manga"
>the nipples are censored
for_what_purpose.png

Base +6

@IMNC
Hey, if you want uncensored Nipples you can always check out my Patreon! For just $5 a month you can gain access to uncensored pages, WIP Concept art and more!

https://www.patreon.com/onigashima

or if you just want to pay one-time for the uncensored nipples you can also do it at my Gumroad! ^ ^

https://gumroad.com/products/EFFFC

Last edited on 05 June 2017, 14:51.

Base +6, DAsianFatass +10, Fallendragonmaster +6

I don't want to be rude, but Dizzy looks almost exactly like Merry Nightmare:

https://www.google.com/search?q=Merry+Nightmare&num=20&client=firefox-b&dcr=0&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjc_Km3tOPXAhWCfZAKHVViAS4Q_AUICigB&biw=1366&bih=767

I love that character, but you should be careful with any copyright issue in the future.

Base +6