Update: Shinon -> Sinon and many other things

Maybe I'll do [Split] next (just maybe, GGO Sinon with no-face character is not really my type)

Thanks for the translation. Just a few points of correction.

Pg. 3, Lower-right: "I knew we could count on Sinon."
Pg. 4, Lower-right: "Not like we could help them even if we wanted to."
Pg. 7, Middle: "Hey, Sinon!"
Pg. 9, Middle: "is as much as I can take."
Pg. 12, Middle (box): "to do such naughty things."
Pg. 12, Middle (bubble): "My hips won't stop."
Pg. 14, Bottom: "The Harassment Prevention Code...?"
Pg. 15, Bottom: "Sinon?"

Again, thanks for the translation. "Sinon" seems to be the generally accepted version of her user name, whereas Shino is her actual name. Changing it to "Sinon" or leaving it as "Shinon" would be up to you.

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Ok, thank you, I'm not really familiar with SAO after ALO arc so I forgot that people call her by Sinon, I'll try fixing it whenever I can

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That mating press should have appeared on the anime to make Kirito more OP.

Anyways, some pages have really small text. The editor could make letters bigger and use white countour on the text so it stands out from the box, not needing to make it fit inside and focusing more on the readability.

It might be a crappy explanation, so just look it up on google or youtube and there should be some guides explaining this properly.

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@Kinights
Thank you for your suggestion, but this is actually just my personal interest. I used to do that method you mentioned in my older translations, but in time I found it really crappy and looked somewhat ugly so I tried my best to fit all of the text in the box. But yeah, you are right, I'm doing this for others to read so I should be focusing more on the readability rather than personal interest.

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Sinonon = best girl

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Updated series list

1st 2015-06-14 (SC2015 Summer) [Angyadow (Shikei)] Difference (Sword Art Online) https://e-hentai.org/g/888395/3e97b70d73/ EHCOVE TL
2nd 2015-08-16 (C88) [Angyadow (Shikei)] Crack (Sword Art Online) https://e-hentai.org/g/952737/be91027157/ EHCOVE TL
34d 2015-10-04 Extra 34 https://e-hentai.org/g/1567015/05310b8c66/ Hennojin TL
4th 2015-12-31 (C89) [Angyadow (Shikei)] Split (Sword Art Online)https://e-hentai.org/g/1079084/bc95bebfc3/ EHCOVE+葛の寺 TL
5th 2016-02-28 (SC2016 Winter) [Angyadow (Shikei)] Break off (Sword Art Online) https://e-hentai.org/g/985179/8445258a5a/ doujins.com TL
6th 2016-05-01 (COMIC1☆10) [Angyadow (Shikei)] Envy (Sword Art Online) https://e-hentai.org/g/1071317/d1e0d94a6b/ 葛の寺 TL
7th 2016-07-03 (SC2016 Summer) [Angyadow (Shikei)] Mount (Sword Art Online) https://e-hentai.org/g/1071033/00be321ace/ 葛の寺 TL <--WE ARE HERE
8th 2016-08-14 (C90) [Angyadow (Shikei)] Case closed. (Sword Art Online) https://e-hentai.org/g/1071032/102f1d3a86/ 葛の寺 TL
9th 2016-09-18 (CT28) [Angyadow (Shikei)] Bonus track (Sword Art Online) https://e-hentai.org/g/1230436/7ca19d84cf/ White Symphony TL

additional works
2015-03-28 EXTRA 31 not scanned separately yet https://www.doujinshi.org/book/1159108/Extra-31/ but included in https://e-hentai.org/g/1239380/3a4ab2dc7e/ . Despite being the first it is included after bonus? Not translated yet

2018-12-31 EXTRA 58 https://e-hentai.org/g/1491669/77ab55d85b/ Hennojin TL
2020-09-27 EXTRA 65 https://e-hentai.org/g/1745831/20b89aa3a2/ not TL yet

other charactrs

Asuna
2016-08-14 EXTRA 38 https://e-hentai.org/g/1083779/20696b6ab0/ 葛の寺 TL

Yuuki
2016-12-31 Yuuki Ijiri https://e-hentai.org/g/1070423/31a201f889/ 葛の寺 TL
2017-02-26 Yuuki Ijiri 2 https://e-hentai.org/g/1079986/c760b64073/ 葛の寺 TL
2019-12-31 Yuuki Ijiri 3 NO ENG TL YET RAW https://e-hentai.org/g/1551330/817a7637af/
2019-08-12 Extra61 https://e-hentai.org/g/1731521/f32eadc11f/ (low quality scan)

Alice
Extra 64 https://e-hentai.org/g/1707409/4d24867824/ SomedaySoonStudios TL

Other
2017-12-31 Extra48 not scanned yet has sample show some SAO content https://www.doujinshi.org/book/1101038/Extra-48/
2018-08-12 Extra 54 https://e-hentai.org/g/1427455/40c50be36d/ some rough sketches. nothing to translate

Last edited on 18 October 2020, 01:09.

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Why are these all being translated out of order

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I assume harassment prevention was added after the times Asuna was mercilessly fondled...

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