Hey guys, I'm sorry but, in the last page, I don't know if the translation is correct, I'm almost sure but not 100%
Thank you again for your feedback on my uploads, if you want an Asuna hentai translated or if you talk japanese contact me okay?

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The last page bottom two panels should be
"That was the best, Asuna-sama."
"Sir, please give me a turn now."(seems to be one of the other guys)
"I suppose...what would you like, Asuna-sama?"
"...I'll do it."

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thanks i really love asuna

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why are so many doujin with some NTR in it that don't have the tag?, i feel that I lost a good number of may good NTR doujin, i have been years here and this happens too much with a lot of doujin (not only ntr), That makes it difficult to find them, well, whatever, this one is good, good work for the translation.

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sargueras: for some reason people like to enforce a really narrow definition of ntr here, kind of sucks because it makes it hard to find a lot of borderline doujins and mangas that have that "netorare feel" since there's no other tag that could describe what sets them apart from the huge masses of generalized hentai

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Pg 17. Two years worth of semen made a glopping noise

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feels more like rape then ntr to me, but thats just my opinion....

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Yossarian 762, I see, it's a pity that the NTR definition will be so narrow, I understand that sometimes the NTR in the doujin are very light or like you say the "netorare feel" is weak as to be perceived it in comparison with the tipical NTR of married woman or girlfriend and only put the standard tags, too it´s true that some NTR that only are in japanese or derivated it can be difficult to see the NTR, and other like the "parody doujin" that If you don´t know the main story You may not see the NTR but what I don´t understand is when is obvious, if the character A have affection for B, and A for whatever reason goes with a C person, there are a feeling of traition, if that feeling are there. for me is NTR, there are lots doujins that have tags like mind break,rape and mindcontrol that are NTR too but don´t have this last one tag, for example: https://e-hentai.org/g/801336/cf6e678c53/ For me this is a very good NTR and don't have the tag and it´s a pity becouse I know that there is much more like this but It's hard find them if you have to read all the doujins of rape,mind break and mind control that don´t have the NTR tag

redbone: I understand, You have to keep in mind that if the girl at final enjoy the act, then, is NTR, there are lot of OVAS that begin with rape of the woman and at the end the woman enjoy have sex with other guy, in this case asuna in the page 15 She gives in to pleasure and want have sex with the other guy that aren´t kirito (his boyfriend) for me is a clear case of NTR, she literaly ask for him to penetrate her

(Sorry if my comment is hard to understand, i am not very good writing in english xd)

Last edited on 28 June 2017, 05:52.

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That's why we have the entire forum section dedicated to scanlation, and at least one thread for translators to ask questions :P Do stop by next time

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I'm really sorry guys, I updated this at 3pm ad I was really tired, I forgot to put the tags. I'm gonna correct the lastpage today

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Garfield had a record of every player... so he had to know Kuradeel was in two guilds at once. I guess anything that made the game harder to win was fine with him.

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