You either die a hero...

Base +15, Iroald +6, George642 +9, jfragrettel +8, randumnaem +7, elwendys +3, anon5678 +6, sunshineandlolipops +21, Hollywater +10

extra tick (°▽°)/

Base +2, durkadrr +6, jfragrettel +8, anon5678 +6, sunshineandlolipops +21, elwendys +5

She looks like Black Widow.

Base +6, agamersday +6, sunshineandlolipops -21, ununiqueone -6, Uneliasmarsu -6, 柒岚萧雨 -3, aaron235 +4

I want that slime.

Base +6, anon5678 +6, sunshineandlolipops +21

Good doujin if you like femdom tickle torture. The translation, while not inaccurate, was incredibly disappointing. The translator inserts his own bored sarcasm into the translation and uses (LOL) as a translation. To me this seemed incredibly juvenile and took away from the doujin.

Art 6. Plot 5. Translation 3. All out of 10.

Base +7, Hideaki Anno -6, sunshineandlolipops -21, Uneliasmarsu -6, elwendys -5, anon5678 -6, SilentSnake1995 -9, fraubou -12