The sheer number of pages is good, but the writing is atrocious. Ignoring the OCs, none of the characters talk or act like the originals, they might as well be OCs themselves.

Base +9, Neonmane -7

I noticed no updates since August, 2017. I'm guessing this is bound to be yet another in an endless series of uncompleted comics posted on this site? It wouldn't surprise me. That's just as well since this thing isn't that good to begin with so, in an odd way, it's a relief you gave up on this thing since I'd probably be just as disappointed by the ending as I am the rest of this thing.

Base +4, Neonmane -7, l4chuga -7

Is it still ongoing?

Base +5