Please hit me with a feedback if you find any errors, I'll try to fix them as soon as I can

Update: page 2
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Currently our team still need redrawer, typesetter, translator, proofreader, quality checker, if you wanna help please contact me through my twitter @Rokusanji

Our discord: discord.gg/Gnj7b3j

Tfw no cute, petite flat-chested childhood friend to sun dry my sheets and cuddle with me...
This was incredibly adorable
Thanks for the translation/upload!

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I'm about to hit you a lot, because you wrote scene instead of scent like four times.

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@Uploader Now please don't take this offensively since I DO appreciate you trying to translate and upload this in English even though it isn't your native language and still did better than say Larafulli or CGRascal, but have you ever considered finding a QC/TC to assist you?

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@Fate Averruncus
I never consider doing so though
I mean, I think I said this a couple of times but since all of this is technically given for "free" unless the readers give me feedbacks about where or what to change, I won't bother
My translation is "free" if you want it to be good then you can either point out the errors or commission others like NO4H, ATF, EHCOVE or Hennojin
but then again please point out the errors, thank you

@Boshi
ok, ok I'm fixing it

Last edited on 02 August 2017, 05:19.

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kawazu!!!

try reading " Ore to Kawazu-san no Isekai Hourouki " and spot the difference!!!

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Feedback/community QC is an okay solution. It's better than leaving a typo/grammer mistake there forever.

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Page 2: Seet -> Seats

Page 14: My hips are moving without my command - This sounds weird. Maybe go with the good old: "My hips are moving on their own"

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i translated this in my native language back then and botherd me a lot in several words some and made mistakes never really bothered fixing them tought due to the fact that someone will one day translate it in english! [YOU]...

https://e-hentai.org/g/927664/95b5b4eb27/
just another slappy work from some slappy joe from the philippines! [ME!]

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So beautiful.

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Page 2 Panel 2 Changed our 'seet' should be 'seats' or 'seating'
page 8 panel 4 Not 'top' it should be 'stop'
page 11 'those heartwarming confessions' or 'all that heartwarming confessing'

The dialogue is incredibly bad after page 9, but it isn't the translation's fault, lolz! You've done better than I could possibly do.
Still a fun and cute story, DFC girls rule!

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@5Cats
I think that makes sense... I mean it was 4 A.M when I was doing page 9, after that my brain failed me hard

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She didn't let the tits win. Good for her.
>TFW no petanko childhood friend to crush on.

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