RAW https://e-hentai.org/g/975740/3d8a4b3631/
DL http://www.dlsite.com/books/work/=/product_id/BJ070300.html

Hello all, this is my first time editing a Manga, I hope you like it. I decided not to translate the colored text since it's SFX and mostly there to censor the Manga but if there is any typo or an awkward sentence feel free to comment, I will try to edit that part.

Page 14, Panel 1: "Just from the nipple I feel so... This... Forget 10 times I almost came..."
Forget? Felt like? But sounds also strange ... How can something feel like 10 times you almost came ... But if that's the original script ...

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5 star for coloring, 1 set (part 1 &2) +english ...the grammar can be fixed....

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About page 14 it does seem kinda awkward, the meaning of the bubble is that they don't feel just 10 times better because she almost came from Chiyo's licking.. but I'm not sure how to convey this naturally speaking without making it too long, if anyone have a suggestion please feel free to comment on it :)

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Page 26: If only I could be so grossly incandescent.

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i despise this type of censorship the most

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@HSamurai: You colored this?
Page 14: Oh, now I get it. This is a pivotal point. "It's really 10 times better ... Just from the nipple ... I almost came"

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@titswifter No i did not, this is the original work. I only cleaned the manga and added my translation. In my upload comment i have a link for the raw manga here in e-hentai as well as the DL for anyone that want to support the authors

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A girl is raped, and the rapist immediately is genderbent.
Next, hot lesbian revenge sex, and then a traditional rape!
Serves him well, but still....

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I wish I could be gender-bent into a hot sexy girl like he got turned into. But what bugs me about this story is how he just changed with no explanation as to how or why it happened. He just changed after cumming, something that doesn't just happen. They should have added in some reason why cumming made him turn into a girl.

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