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[3D Comic] Strapy - Cadet report

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Posted:2017-08-30 08:12
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:Japanese  
File Size:3.90 MiB
Length:40 pages
Favorited:119 times
Rating:
77
Average: 2.60

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Posted on 30 August 2017, 08:12 by:   kiss_s2    PM
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Tumblr link: https://strapy.tumblr.com/
Patreon link: https://patreon.com/strapy
Posted on 30 August 2017, 09:58 by:   DarkShadow6    PM
Score +12
this be some poor, awkward writing, but at least it doesn't have as many of the usual glaring spelling and grammar errors for comics of this style. additionally, some of the text is cut off.
the renders look alright but there isn't much going on besides the dialogue, so it doesn't feel that interesting. the cock model is pretty horrible up close and really needs to be smoothed out.
overall I give it 10/10 it's ok - ign out of 10.
Posted on 30 August 2017, 12:19 by:   h94686464    PM
Score -11
↓翻译下
Posted on 30 August 2017, 22:47 by:   zoico    PM
Score +1
这是一些糟糕的,笨拙的写作,但至少它没有像这种风格的漫画一样常见的明显的拼写和语法错误。此外,有些文本被截断。
渲染看起来不错,但是除了对话之外没有什么其他的,所以感觉不那么有趣。公鸡模型是非常可怕的接近,真的需要理顺。
<BR>我给它10/10可以设计出10。
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