this be some poor, awkward writing, but at least it doesn't have as many of the usual glaring spelling and grammar errors for comics of this style. additionally, some of the text is cut off. the renders look alright but there isn't much going on besides the dialogue, so it doesn't feel that interesting. the cock model is pretty horrible up close and really needs to be smoothed out. overall I give it 10/10 it's ok - ign out of 10.