9/10- Some corrections made

Raws from https://e-hentai.org/g/1106061/8575064feb/

I wish this had been more gay

Come to the 4chan /u/ translation thread if you can help with translations or editing

It would be pretty cool if this kind of connection was made in the canon, but I can understand the notion of wanting to disconnect and differentiate.

Base +8, harinezumi +6, WisteriaBerlitz +6, Novanity +5, rinrikun +6, Netto +6, GO_KENTA +8

This was a nice story. Minor error in pg 07, "reccomendation" should be "recommendation" (one "c" and two "m")

Base +6, Novanity +5, rinrikun +6

Got really confused when reading some parts so I went check the raws...

P15.
Should be 'I will be spoiled by you', not spoiling you.

P16.
Should be 'would be hard on me', it's apparently referring to Maki herself

P22:
Top-right : 'It's important to think about the future.'
Bottom-left: 'If you keep thinking stuff one year ahead'

Base +7, Novanity +5

pg 22, "It's important to think about the future about, too." you have "about" twice. should be, "It's important to think about the future."

Base +6, Novanity +5

https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=59994719

https://www.melonbooks.co.jp/detail/detail.php?product_id=190208

https://www.doujinshi.org/book/962877/

Last edited on 22 September 2017, 14:37.

Base +4, Miles Edgeworth +45

Darn, I'm crying, they are sooo precious! Love it!

Base +7