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[Doxy] Zooic (Ongoing)

Western
Posted:2017-09-14 12:08
Parent:1102685
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:84.86 MiB
Length:20 pages
Favorited:701 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.37

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Posted on 11 June 2017, 12:19 by:   SpermShower    PM
Score +24
Page 10 added.
Last edited on 17 June 2017, 13:01.
Posted on 17 June 2017, 15:10 by:   AidanSaul    PM
Score +55
The reading order of the speech bubbles on page 2 makes no sense to me. Is this read right-left or left-right? It seems right-left. Thus the conversation seems to start on that page with panel 2's "Stop your whining..." but the bubble above it is in response? So we're to read from the bottom of the panel to the top? But then the next panel (reading right-left) has the ellipsed sentence end with the middle panel, then we read up for a response, then down to the third panel? So the full dialogue for the page reads:

"Oh stop your whining, we're fine."
"Yeah you're fine. I'm slowly being drained...now we're both gonna die out here cuz you got greedy."
"You have more than enough power..."
"All our problems vaporized with that ship."

If you take line 3 (more than enough power) as an interrupt that happens between the ellipse, then it seems like such a lengthy interrupt would have them talking over each other. Am I getting this right? Can I suggest you think on re-ordering the speech bubbles? I feel there is little flow to the conversation, and the inconsistent direction to read is confusing.
Posted on 17 June 2017, 17:15 by:   SpermShower    PM
Score +72
I don't know actually, none of this makes any sense to me either, and its not just about speech bubbles order. To be honest it would be way better without speech bubbles at all. I feel like loosing brain cells when I try to read or understand this so I suggest you to not pay any attention to the text in this.
Last edited on 17 June 2017, 22:49.
Posted on 22 June 2017, 02:02 by:   Hyperfapz0r    PM
Score +13
What the hell is happening in here? Is this sexual content? The artist managed to turn something with potential to pure garbage anyway gj
Posted on 23 June 2017, 17:30 by:   SpermShower    PM
Score +29
I don't know either. Seems like the mess in doxy head get worse every day. You can tell how bad it is by reading stuff he writes on his twitter.
Posted on 29 June 2017, 03:28 by:   nkhailhna    PM
Score +42
Guys, what's with the confusion. It's clearly a left-to-right comic.
Posted on 06 July 2017, 01:33 by:   Budapeststyl    PM
Score +29
Can someone explain what's going on here?
Posted on 09 August 2017, 04:03 by:   Hyperfapz0r    PM
Score +28
I don't care about the dialogue. More futanari FROTTAGE for the win
Posted on 24 August 2017, 11:20 by:   Cleverbird    PM
Score +21
Is.. Is that supposed to be ZoDee? What did Doxy do to her? She looks so weird now! D:
Posted on 14 September 2017, 14:20 by:   C-ON    PM
Score +8
Holy fuck 20 pages of NOTHING
Posted on 15 September 2017, 05:19 by:   Rayne2503    PM
Score -39
Will this not be shit at some point?
Posted on 29 September 2017, 06:29 by:   Hemda    PM
Score -16
I love this shit its wrll written entertaining to read cant wait to see what happrns next
Posted on 19 October 2017, 09:04 by:   billybug    PM
Score +13
What a waste of a good character. If they just did NSFW content from the beginning, they could -stop- at page 20.
Posted on 12 March 2018, 01:54 by:   vincent_darkwood    PM
Score -5
glad to see i'm not the only one that doesn't get what's going on at all
Posted on 29 July 2022, 16:16 by:   Maxsteele    PM
Score +14
So is this dead, or was it finished and never released here?

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