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[Wata Ame (Pino Suke)] Amaoto ni Hibiku (Akatsuki no Yona) [English] [TripleSevenScans]

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Free Hentai Doujinshi Gallery: [Wata Ame (Pino Suke)] Amaoto ni Hibiku (Akatsuki no Yona) [English] [TripleSevenScans]
Posted:2017-09-14 15:56
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Posted on 14 September 2017, 15:56 UTC by:   mikol    PM
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raw https://e-hentai.org/g/1092241/e83cffe910/
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=63106121
http://www.toranoana.jp/bl/article/04/0030/54/19/040030541921.html?circle_new

https://www.doujinshi.org/book/1027116/
Posted on 14 September 2017, 21:09 UTC by:   Kremera    PM
Score +18
With someone so innocent like her, you can't help but feel your S-Meter fill up.
Something about this Shoujo/Josei kind of artstyle makes me like it more.
Posted on 17 September 2017, 01:08 UTC by:   Shinko.Aelith    PM
Score +53
It's always good to see some Hak/Yona translated, furthermore it's cute and the translation is good.
Still, there's room for improvement for TripleSevenScans's job on some point :
- no crops when necessary
- lack on caps -> "i" instead of "I", or "haku" instead of "Haku"
- write the Japanese pronunciation instead of the true name, "haku" should be "Hak". It's just like writting "Erizabesu" instead of "Elisabeth"...
- deblurring, or at least overlevel some areas to avoid random gray areas would have been good
- size of the text sometimes too small or too big for the bubble. It sometimes need to be centered better

People will probably say I'm picky, but when you make people pay for a tl/edit job, it's normal to offer quality in exchange, instead of a muddled and lazy editing.

mikol, next time you commission a HakYona doujin, just ask for a script and I'll edit it for you ; it will let you keep more money for your other projects.
Posted on 14 October 2017, 07:20 UTC by:   memmoma    PM
Score +6
holy shit the art look so similar to original

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