Best Lilo comic I have seen yet! Great stuff! Wouldn't mind a sequel!!!

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the professor had some messed up dialogue in a couple panels. translation error?

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Yer I wasn't sure if it was a translation error or the character had bad English to start with. I think it's the former as Nani's dialogue has a few errors.

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Good stuff, thanks a lot for sharing :)

For tagging, please don't tag this with the poor grammar tag, that tag only applies to translations and this is an original English language work, no matter what anybody thinks, not a translation = can't be tagged poor grammar.

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the bottom panel on page 4 looks like a close up of mulan lol

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Imagine being Professor Kamaka in that scene and having to be all like "damn, Nani Pelekai, you fuckin' fine, all sexy with your tight body and horrific androgynous monster face. I would totally have sex with you, both my character and the real me." when all he really wants to do is fuck another 16 year old in his dressing room. Like seriously imagine having to be Kamaka and not only sit in that chair while Nani Pelekai flaunts her disgusting body in front of you, the favorable lighting barely concealing her stretchmarks and leathery skin, and just sit there, take after take, hour after hour, while she perfected that dance. Not only having to tolerate her monstrous fucking visage but her haughty attitude as everyone on set tells her she's STILL GOT IT and DAMN, NANI PELEKAI LOOKS LIKE *THAT*?? because they're not the ones who have to sit there and watch her mannish fucking gremlin face contort into types of grimaces you didn't even know existed before that day. You've been fucking nothing but a healthy diet of blondes and supermodels and later alleged rape victims for your ENTIRE CAREER coming straight out of the boonies in Hawaii. You've never even seen anything this fucking disgusting before, and now you swear you can taste the sweat that's breaking out on her dimpled stomach as she sucks it in to writhe it suggestively at you, smugly assured that you are enjoying the opportunity to get paid to sit there and revel in her "statuesque (for that is what she calls herself)" beauty, the beauty she worked so hard for with personal trainers in the previous months. And then the director calls for another take, and you know you could kill every single person in this room before the studio security could put you down, but you sit there and endure, because you're fucking Professor Kamaka. You're not going to lose your future political career over this. Just bear it. Hide your face and bear it.

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@svines85 I think it's a translation by the author himself, does that count?

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Omae Wa Mou Shindeiru!

Nani!

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my favorite page is 19 because of the position the professor has Nani in and will there be a sequel with the same kind of sex as in this comic or a little more hardcore like bdsm, something less or maybe something to work towards the hardcore stuff?

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The opening few pages remind me of True Lies. Damn Jamie Lee Curtis was old, but SO HOT in that movie.

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I could hardly read it. :/ I could tell from the first piece of dialouge it was broken English when the person off screen asked the guy at the door "are you going in?"

The author isn't English and honestly, I believe the Spanish one is the original, making this a translation regardless of which came first (like I said, author is not a native speaker.)

I think the gallery easily qualifies for poor grammar.

That said, the art is decent, but author should lay off the highlights a little, makes the characters either look like they're covered head to toe in oil, or made of latex (interestingly they didn't start off shiny, you could say they just got sweaty, but you don't shine like that from sweat.)

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