Translation end editing by suzume_n
The translation is a bit shoddy this time, but if you can't read moonrunes it should be good enough.
raw is here https://e-hentai.org/g/1124489/525e724ab0/

Yeah, pretty much none of the names or dialogue are correct.

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Who the fuck are "Michiko", "Asami", and "Azumi"? I'd go as far as to call this a rewrite, not a translation. As a fan of the show, this is just insulting.

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It's been SO long since I last saw a kurogane Kenn doujin...

Remember, if you cannot meet the barest minimum standards, don't be in a hurry, keep working on it before uploading it and don't be afraid of asking for help, because if a shitty version appears, the chances of a second translation appearing are slim (other than the work being really popular, and even then I've seen some tankos waiting for months or years due to a first or second chapter being butchered)

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Please, someone purge this translation. It goes beyond terrible.

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卧槽这位百合界大佬居然还有新本

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The fact that the translator couldn't even be arsed to look up the characters' names is damning. A bad translation is worse than no translation at all/

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