https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=65459398

I suppose it's English by some definition. Pity, since the art and story aren't bad.

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The creator tried to translate it themselves? Still not going to call really bad English good, but I'll respect them making the effort.

Last edited on 18 October 2017, 03:55.

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Great stuff, thanks a lot for sharing, I do love me some bbm on hot babe to sex slave and mind break :)

And I don't believe "translated" is right, this is done in English on the artist/author's site, so I think that makes it OEL / the "poor grammar" tag doesn't apply, it's just kinda engrish is all :D

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It's always nice to see an author go out of their way to try and translate their own work. A+ for effort.

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As if that fat garbage could dominate Saber, and even Gilgamesh did not get it.

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I enjoyed it! Thank you for drawing and translating Merkonig.

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y'know, it would be less misleading upon reading the title to simply have in brackets (Engrish).

I don't mean to make fun of this attempt mind you, it just needs to be edited/proofread before release.

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Semen choke, that is all.

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I have a sneaking suspicion English is this person's forte... Art was pretty great, though.

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Feels like the translation was intentionally bad. If it was a Japanese person using a translator or something, why would a word like "story" become "stroy". No, this is probably a westerner pretending he is a Japanese person with poor English.

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99% ntr doujins are about girls being stupid, as shown by the narrator's (here being the girl Saber) being mentally retarded. The author captured the essence of Japanese ntr doujin like a champ.

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