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[Strong Bana] I Need Some Milk (League of Legends) [Rewrite]

Western
Posted:2017-10-24 16:19
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Visible:Yes
Language:English  RW
File Size:25.92 MiB
Length:28 pages
Favorited:1726 times
Rating:
307
Average: 4.61

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Posted on 24 October 2017, 16:50 by:   Noni    PM
Score +64
Great upload! I clove ths x-ray views in here, that's not so common in Western style. You'll find them on p. 13, p. 22 and p. 27. Thanks for sharing this!
Posted on 24 October 2017, 20:01 by:   onenightes    PM
Score +188
I'd call this a horrible translation, but this doesn't look like it's been translated. It's just written by someone who doesn't understand English grammar.
Posted on 24 October 2017, 20:05 by:   TheFierceDeity    PM
Score +114
A nice piece, but holy Christ is the text bad. I really don't understand what's so hard about proofreading.
Posted on 24 October 2017, 20:35 by:   Newprimus    PM
Score +52
The dialogue is terrible, but isn't that standard for the majority of Western hentai comics? ¯_(ツ)_/¯
Posted on 24 October 2017, 20:43 by:   Tsuum    PM
Score +97
Why you changed the dialogues? this is not the real one guys . the real one has better texts this is just a re-text and its REALLY bad
Posted on 24 October 2017, 20:52 by:   Hentiecorno    PM
Score +15
Anyone got the reference from gonnozom (I can milk these tits)
Posted on 24 October 2017, 21:15 by:   Nightbringer777    PM
Score +109
HE NEEDS SOME MIIILK
Posted on 24 October 2017, 23:15 by:   Dynamite Ninja    PM
Score +43
You can't milk those tits
I CAN MILK THESE TITS
Posted on 25 October 2017, 00:30 by:   Oppaimaker    PM
Score +16
"You can't milk those!"
Alistar, buddy, you might rethink that line...
Posted on 25 October 2017, 03:09 by:   sosuke666    PM
Score +17
The dialogue here is cringy, but the story was at least sort of enjoyable, more on the side of ''let me watch how the story is re-written'' standpoint
Posted on 25 October 2017, 03:14 by:   DarkGiro    PM
Score +28
pretty bad english
Posted on 25 October 2017, 03:14 by:   FXB9999    PM
Score +21
为什么牛头能被挤出牛奶啊,明明是公牛啊
Posted on 25 October 2017, 03:45 by:   Yeasayer    PM
Score +33
It's times like these that I wish the poor grammar tag was applicable to original language works.

EDIT: Whoops! Didn't see that it was a rewrite earlier. It might as well have been in Wingdings.
Posted on 25 October 2017, 04:25 by:   Vilnius    PM
Score +21
I hate rewrites just as much as the next guy, but are we sure this is one? Strong Bana has one other work on here and the English is just as bad. Unless that's also a rewrite, in which case it needs that tag and someone needs to upload the originals.
Posted on 25 October 2017, 06:02 by:   壮壮人    PM
Score +25
互相喝对方奶达成共识
Posted on 25 October 2017, 07:19 by:   linkvszelda    PM
Score +25
和公牛角力,我会让你尝尝牛屌的滋味
Posted on 25 October 2017, 07:22 by:   homogenized    PM
Score +80
Just compare the second pic to this from the artist's deviantart:

https://strongbana.deviantart.com/art/I-need-some-milk-001-699135709
Posted on 25 October 2017, 07:58 by:   NotSwordfish    PM
Score +24
When they say milk from a bull I expected something different. It got there eventually, but still
Posted on 25 October 2017, 21:10 by:   jantch    PM
Score +37
The text reads like its Strong Bana's english, and he has used that font before. PaladinTaim did the typesetting and helped with the text for the versions on patreon and deviantart.
Last edited on 25 October 2017, 21:45.
Posted on 25 October 2017, 21:13 by:   MacXIII    PM
Score +5
Why is lactation tag put in the male?
Posted on 26 October 2017, 04:59 by:   Thedeadly    PM
Score +14
Didn't know that this was a rewrite, never saw the original.
Posted on 27 October 2017, 00:10 by:   Kamo1    PM
Score +14
@MacXIII Page 15 bullman's being milked...
Posted on 03 November 2017, 19:33 by:   drame    PM
Score -8
"Do your anal feel good" - the broken english is out of control.
Posted on 07 November 2017, 00:26 by:   johnbturnip    PM
Score +12
Hooray for a happy ending!
Posted on 10 November 2017, 15:01 by:   XiMuLai233    PM
Score +0
希望有人汉化,想看中文版ԅ(¯ㅂ¯ԅ)
Posted on 04 December 2017, 18:50 by:   qwety0027    PM
Score -2
awesome art and fuck
Posted on 11 July 2022, 00:14 by:   kiwino    PM
Score +13
@jantch: you rename my Pokemon doujinshi gallery into wrong one, asshole

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