feel free to ask me stuff this is my first porn comic
all characters are above 21 years of age

you tried... a for effort

Base +2, Rule63MePlease -5, nopenosorry +6, oneiwonder +7, Ictiosis +5, Bisharp96 +6

Instead of calling this shit im going to try adding some constructive criticism. 1 look into shading and shadows for more 3d effects and to give your characters literal depth 2 you may look at your own body to see how joint and proportions on the body work, if they are off by too much or sometimes just in the wrong places it can really add up to issues. 3 add more details to the people in general, those details can help differentiate yourself from other artists. one good thing i have to say is while your writing isnt perfect it is better than alot of starting artists ive seen. I hope to see you after a bit of practice and dont give up if you have a few people hating on it.

Base +6, nopenosorry +6, braincoral999 +7, oneiwonder +7, takuyasha +7, bobistherock -6

Was this a joke? If not, you really need to work on your art and story telling ability.

Base +5, Rule63MePlease +5

Forgetting about coloring first, it takes up too much time. The first thing you should do is work on your basic skills on drawing characters.
Your priority should be making them look good and cute, spent 99% of ur time to improve that.Otherwise your efforts would be completely wasted. Trust me

Base +7, Rule63MePlease +5, Stre Led +6, oneiwonder +7

Wut?!? I don’t even know what to make of this. This is really bad art wise. It might actually be worse then spoon hero.

Base +6

+1 for not tracing everything
-2 for plot/writing/grammar
-2 for anatomy/shading/scale

1/5

Keep practicing. You'll probably get there eventually.

Base +8, oneiwonder +7, Ictiosis +5, MrGitara +6

BUT JAMES SAW EVERYTHING

Base +5, Wosh +7, CaptainCatfish +6

Life is even shorter than your limp micro penis

Base +6, Furryboi04 +4

Your talents are wasted on porn. Look at Tails Gets Trolled. You should be doing stuff like that.

Base +6, Ictiosis +5

"I hate sounding like proffessor Bitch"

Kek

Base +8, Ictiosis +5, Silent Sadist +5, AN1337 +6