Pages 6 and 7 are repeats. ._. Also page 9. "We! Outdoors!" Should be "We're outdoors!" Page 10 "We'll do alot tomorrow" Should be "We'll do it alot tomorrow" Page 11 "I really don't want to do it outdoor" Should be "I really don't want to do it outdoors"
Base +7, jfragrettel +8, Originality +6, spirit7stanmued2 +2