Any more just like this? - update*** Seelenmord Sucks! Thanks for the -10 for no reason ***hole

Last edited on 06 January 2018, 15:54.

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@cdxlhentai The person(s) who commissioned this ran out of funds for the time being. Until the artist gets more money, there isn't any more coming just yet. But it is a awesome comic so far.

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出肉的阿阿狸。。

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I mean it's drawn alright and the colorization is pretty good, but holy what? Like who pays 1200 bucks to commission a comic where video game characters get eaten/absorbed by a bugged character?

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wtf of this

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The artist could have finished the comic if he got 1200 bucks for it...

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@Jiltist even if was into vore I don't think I'd pay that much money for it.

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1200 bucks? Man, I've been under charging people...

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Hello everyone, OkiOppai here!

Thank you very much for all the feed back on the comic I made, it is much appreciated especially as this is my first project of its kind. I do plan on doing a few pictures on this for free as thanks, so there will be some very soon!!!!

- To answer a few comments :

I also understand that that is a lot of money for a commission, which i pointed out at the very start of the commission process.

I would just quickly like to clarify with the pricing, I worked on this non stop everyday for 3 weeks, so it averages out at $400 a week for 7 days a week of drawing, no off day. Which is nothing special when you think of the time put into it. Average wage. To which i should point out is my job. So i Apologies if this upsets people in any way.

With this being said and done again thank you very much for reading the comic and all the favorites and such.

Kind regards,

OkiOppai

- UPDATE -
P.S To @GuroLover12 and anyone else saying do the rest for free (This can be said to me or any other artist on hire), all i need say to counter what you said ; How about you do YOUR job for free as well, your boss has paid you enough already why not do weeks of work for free right? Again to clarify asking me or any other person to do their job for free is basically saying dont earn a living at all. Sorry, but to the very, VERY few of these people that don't understand like you Guro, people that draw have to make a living too. It's a job that pays on commission. If you don't understand it took 3 weeks to make every day non stop drawing I don't know what to tell you. Also you need to think about your own priorities if you are commenting telling someone to do their job for free on a comic about Ahri eating people. That's all i have to say to you.

- Also everyone else for the ratings and favorites thank you so much again!

Last edited on 22 November 2017, 19:01.

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i just wish there was some pooning going on in here. Then it'd be 5/5 instead of 4/5 cause of pure art.

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Just draw the rest for him for free. You charged him to much already...

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I want going ahri's womb

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不画的这么胖行不行啊大哥！

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lol dat wasted talent...

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wasted talent on crap taste.

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I'm curious, is this an updated comic or just a reupload?

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@Tsubasa171

This is updated. The last page is new. You might notice the slight differences in coloring and style. I hope it'll be continued...

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too fat..........

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good, I'm glad it's updated. honestly, I wish I could draw half as well, or at least have the money for commissions. ah well, I'll stick with writing

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这狐狸真肥

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@okioppai lol good one. So when you are asked how was your tough day at work what do you say? Pretty tough, been drawing ahri from league eating people an stuffing people in her tits and vagina. Yeah "job". Get a real one and stop overcharging for mediocre art

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@GuroLover12 ironic you came over to check this gallery again, did you really want to see the artwork that badly? Given its so mediocre to you why are you here? No one here cares about that opinion.

Also your statement is petty and childish, and only a true child would think that illustration isnt a job, ive had various jobs in my time and this one is no different. Also yeah i am pretty open about my job to people and they really dont care about its erotic nature mostly. They show more interest than anything.

Dont act so butthurt because i can make a living drawing pictures and you cant, dont comment at all if you cant give a decent answer, because your "mediocre" reply is a joke, a bad joke from an upset child and everyone can see it.

Again thank you everyone else for the support on the comic as of present i plan to publish more pages soon!!!!

Last edited on 06 April 2018, 17:21.

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I can tell a lot of effort went into this, but the faces look pretty strange at times.
I recommend practicing drawing male faces more, because at the moment they look way too feminine.

Also, just a general criticism, but the placement of facial features seems off in some panels, like the eyes being too close together or not sitting right on the face from an angle compared to other panels.
The problem is emphasized by characters not really having that big a range of expression, with most of the panels being smirks with lips parted.

Not trying to nitpick. The faces just look bizarre sometimes and really drag everything down.

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Dont worry @ T3CHN0M4NC3R i dont mind constructive criticism, helpful critique is always appreciated!

I dont get to draw many males unless they are super muscly, usually the males i draw are wanted feminine which is why most of them are. Its something i have been practicing in my normal work for a while now. As expressions go i also agree i need to broaden my horizons with them.

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Nobody ever realizes that the Earth is essentially a giant eternally microwaved hot Pocket when she gets to the center of it she'll find hot gooey 10,800 degree hell

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