I found this manga and it looked interesting (considering i can't read it)
this is basically a first attempt at translating and creating a gallery so, expect mistakes and mistranslations.
Despite this hopefully it makes sense.
Enjoy!

Edit: i have changed the font from comic sans, should clear at least 99% of the problems.

It's good to see more scanlators, especially for stuff I wanted to see scanlated myself! Your work, however, needs a bit more improvement.

http://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/How-to-edit-manga-with-Photoshop/rawr/editguide/2.html
I recommend starting from this guide. It should contain everything you need to get better. You should probably choose better fonts, and perhaps better anti-aliasing - a lot of the text looks jagged. You also definitely need a proofreader/quality checker - your script is full of typos and you spell the same name in two different ways on the first page. Ideally someone with a very good command of English.

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Im so bored lately that Id be willing to at the very list do proofreads.

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You better don't with that spelling/grammar @ThatStrangeDoll.

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You might try this too, @The Mastermid
http://prettyanonymo.us/index.php/scanlation-resources/anonblacks-typesetting-guide/

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Thank you all for the advice, I will take it all on and use it in the future.

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+1 to the anonblack typesetting guide
The photoshop advice is a little outdated I think but every beginner typesetter should read the lesson 102 stuff.

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Are you one of those people who actually expect others to bother with those things on the comments of a porn site of all things? @Medra.

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Thanks for having a go at translating it. I really love this piece.

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I've been doing all of this myself, and as I said, I don't have photoshop. The amount of time it takes to translate each page is so long that I procrastinated it until I forgot about it. I still plan on doing it completely alone though.

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Well, so fun, lets see what else is there, keep going bro, good job and doing it you will improve your Japanese.

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everybody's a critic. I think it's silly for people to expect you to be I think it's silly for people to expect you to be proficient at type setting like right away even with the tutorials. the more you do the better you'll get so try not to stress out about it. I used to do some translations and posted them on another account but I got tired of the people complaining about typesetting so I stopped.

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you got a typo at page 11, last panel.

edit: Also, good job with SFX, that is a real royal pain to do, but is fun once you get use to it.

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Lol. I love the look on her face on page 10.

I wonder how exactly he plans to explain why he is a magical girl? Either way, her reaction will probably be priceless....

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@manuel-zero
I'll fix it when I next upload pages. That might be a week from now, though, I only have enough free time on weekends.
Also the SFX are a pain, yes, but I'm willing to go that far for you lot~♡

EDIT: "1 week"? well that didn't hold up...

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画风一转

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