居然是home sweet home的同人本_(:з」∠)_

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The translator probably OD right after uploading this, since the translation shows how high he was doing this.

Edit: K, now I kinda feel bad since I assumed this was a joke translation. I support your efforts Anuttsuii, just hope you get better soon so we all can read the good stuff.

Last edited on 11 December 2017, 06:41.

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@[Anuttsuii I'm curious: you obviously are not a native English speaker. Did you originally write this in some other language, and then use Google translate to turn it into English? In other words, is there a non-english version of this available? I'd be interested in seeing the original version if that is the case.

Also, if you plan on doing other doujins like this, you might want to try and get a proofreader or someone who can help you with the translation and such.

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Thank you for every commend. I also think that my english is too weird like overdose guy too XD.
I really appreciate that all of your commend and i will improvements in my future stuffs Thank you! ＿|￣|○

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Please get a volunteer proofreader on the forums, that way your English releases will be fine. This reads... not very good, sorry to say

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Despite the poor english translation this is an interesting story. I do agree with the other posters comments that some proof reading or editing is in order. Still, i got to read this for free, despite editing it in my mind as i went, so thanks for your efforts.

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