This is first upload, I really hope this is fine! :)
I tried on making my own art which should be at least a little bit cohesive, I hope it's alright.
Have fun reading!

Looks nice, and it reminds me of really early Lemonfont.

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I've been scornful of art too rough to be uploaded but uploaded anyway, fairly critical but constructive to art that's rough but shows promise, and supportive of decent art with talent behind it. Keep going, this looks great and is leagues from anything I've seen which has no possible redemption.

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I really like this style of art. Can you turn this into a series? That would be the coolest thing.

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Agreed on the lemonfont thing, I looked at the first page and went "oh damn is lemon finally going back to doing small sex-filled TF sequences with demon and goo and dick-girls instead of taking a year to make ten pages of nothing but dialogue?"

I imagine it's likely somewhat intentional, but that isn't something I've ever had a problem with personally, especially seeing as Lemon's moved away from this kinda thing. I'd definitely like to see more!

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Wow that was more and kinder feedback than honestly expected!
If I were to make a series, what would you like it to be? Similar to this or with a "plot"? Would you guys be interested in other non-demon characters? Should it be coloured or just b&w?

I also had a look at Lemon Fonts works, they look great, especially the newer ones (I feel honered to be compared to them) and I can safely say that the similarities are mostly coincindece! :)

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Not bad at all for an early upload. Personally, I'd prefer it to stay colored since you seem to have a pretty good handle on it. Imagining this same comic in B&W is a little less interesting for some reason, so even if it takes a bit longer I think it's worth it.

I usually prefer a little more plot but this was good on its own too.

No doubt you'll start getting commission requests as your abilities improve.

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Some cool shit, mane!

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So goddamn cute! You should start NSFW tumblr or something.

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Good news for everyone! I started a NSFW tumblr blog where I will probably upload rough stuff like this! There's not much on it yet, but I will try to post something now and then.
It called ladymidnightmoon.tumblr.com if you're interested! I'm not sure how it works because it's an NSFW blog, if you can't find it just message me quickly!

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