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Susan Swivelhips Boing Boing Girl

Free Hentai Western Gallery: Susan Swivelhips Boing Boing Girl
Posted:2018-01-13 04:18
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:Japanese  
File Size:25.34 MB
Length:6 pages
Favorited:16 times
Rating:
24
Average: 3.17

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Posted on 13 January 2018, 06:07 UTC by:   GeorgieWells    PM
Score +2
I admire the dedication to shit nobody cares about.
Posted on 13 January 2018, 06:39 UTC by:   Kibanekowolfboy    PM
Score +7
Honestly There a few other character people barely give a comic or images verse other. Tiny toon- Gator gals , Toonstruck- Ms Fortune , Polly the sheep, Marge the cow, Sly series- Mz.Ruby, The contessa, and Ms.Decibel.
But I still have to say good work with revive some things people might not seen like this show because it was never on my radar till now.
As for issue with again fact dumping. Honestly you still need to pull yourself back on it and let the art say what you need or it tell itself. Look at [Slypon] EHS First 14 pages it silent but you can tell there emotions of sexualtily take over then you get to pages 166 slypon now just let the art do the talking while a normal convo happen to someone down with their luck. This kinda why I say you don't need to go heavy monologuing or narrative focus on the art before the story.

Reason why i can say that take page four middle panel could of expand with the emotion artwork to 3 more panels itself drawing out the emotion between them both by taking some the sentencing and breaking it off to a pay out. Showing that she need him in way.
I just want to see you improve more and more both art wise and storywise.
Posted on 13 January 2018, 07:02 UTC by:   Foxtide888    PM
Score +16
I get what you mean about all that. But I like doing narration. And this comic was rushed so I could get it out of the way. But I liked how it turned out over all
Posted on 13 January 2018, 18:47 UTC by:   Havel The Rock    PM
Score +11
People can say what they want, but this is still better than my doodles
Posted on 13 January 2018, 21:29 UTC by:   Tonythekat    PM
Score +4
A lot of furries today don't know that Susan Swivelhips, along with Tex Avery's Red Hot Riding Hood, were the inspiration for Jessica Rabbit. Nice to see some of the older and, let's face it, forgotten furry characters of yesteryear get a little renewed interest. I look forward to the color version of this.

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