Ended up redoing this one. The first one was not only incomplete, but also really awkwardly translated. As time changes, you sometimes want to do things better as you learn more.
This won't be the only past doujin I'm going to rework to fill in the time until I get everything else ready for new works. There will be more.

For the record, yes. I am still learning Japanese, but I do want to contribute to series I happen to like by translating doujins for those series.
I'm also still learning how to edit, but as time passes, I hope to improve my skillset over time. That's why I went back to the very first doujin I uploaded on here so I could fix it up proper.

Last edited on 26 January 2018, 10:40.

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I like that you update works when you feel like your understanding of the language has improved and look over things. Proofreading through these things and finding things that you may feel can be translated better or fix grammatical oversights is just one of the many aspects to being a TL and the fact that you DO look back afterwards and fix things as they go proves you take this seriously, so props to you mate.

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RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1090730/0ae2078c78/

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i want to protect mikan smile

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no that's NOT a toy doll,it's a xxxxxx

the pingpong sound made me laugh tho lol

Last edited on 02 November 2018, 02:23.

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