Hi all,
1) English is not my native language. Therefore, a bad translation is better than nothing.
2) This is a fun project for me. I did the subtitles on simple Paint program that come with window.
(nothing fancy)

Lastly, any comment is welcome or any suggestion beside the bad grammar.
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Honestly, i don't think anyone will be complaining about the grammar here. If nothing else, it matches the art.

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>CG doujins
now I've seen everything

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Crappy western style art that looks like computer CG that's been put through a "manga" filter, full censorship with hilariously huge censor zones, low resolution 650 x 925 image file size.

It's like the holy trinity of crappiness. Think you will get better faps installing sex mods and nude models in Oblivion (yes, even older than Skyrim)

No comment on the translation, but I think you should probably work on something that people actually want to read.

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Hi,

I only buy the first few chapters, so I will subtitle up to that point. Any other ttitles or Authors that u would like to get it translate.

Maybe author: Kitasato Naoki title:マザージュースv(mother juice)

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Good job. Find a proofreader/editor and keep up the good work.

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Anyone here who want to volunteer proofreader (just a quickie...doesn't need to be perfect....fan made afterall)
Actually, I like this author horie tankei, his artworks is simple, nothing fancy, but I still like the arts. (except for the big white bar everywhere)

Last edited on 18 February 2018, 21:08.

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If you really plan to continue with this translation, then I suggest that you visit gimp.org first.

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While not the best, you can get better with time. And It is good enough to the point that I understand what's going on. Thank you for the translation! And keep up the great work!

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