Commissioned by E-Hentai

TL&Edit by yours truly

Original gallery:
https://e-hentai.org/g/321395/44986260e0/
https://e-hentai.org/s/50affc9277/321395-447

Info for commission:
https://erotranslations.wordpress.com/commission-faq/
https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showtopic=236543

Update: fixed some mistakes
Update2: fixed some mistakes again

If anyone want to proofread the gallery, please do I appreciate your help and I'll fix it.

they're so innocent they loop back to lewd

Base +11, MACZ2021 +6, stupid army +7, Eyriol +7, Guardsman40k +6, Elementxj +6, fatbro +6, oneiwonder +7, Gitami +12, as102 +10, MadMilkPT +7, manon +6, Sylphar +5, and 2 more...

How sharp is this dude's dick tho ?

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What a fucking weirdo.

"I love you but i dunno bout marriage lol"

Shut the fuck up kid.

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I don't mean to be offensive or anything, I do admire that you gave this a shot afterall and noone can complain fully about translated ero-manga. However, you might want to look into getting a proofreader since the story is littered with grammatical errors.

Base +7, MACZ2021 +6, Unknow0059 +5, Megaton +39, Eyriol +7, Guardsman40k +6, qazmlpok +20, Winter is Cumming +6, fatbro +6, PinguPrin +5, manon +6, jfragrettel +8, Sylphar +5

@Sol_bandus

Pretty sharp, I guess. It's a "Dick that can Pierce the Hymen" after all. :P

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I'm choking on how vanilla it is, you ever taste a spoonful of pure vanilla extract? Yeah this is like that, except that I ended up satisfied in the end.

Base +8, PinguPrin +5, oneiwonder +7, Kikopro +7, as102 +10, jfragrettel +8

A dick cut through fabric a dick penetrate the heaven a dick eruption magma creating serenity cessation a dick can be overwhelming with lust leave a female paralyzed intoxicated to sex is a wonderful thing it art it natural.

Base +3, oneiwonder +7, Lord Quidigibul -7, jfragrettel +8, descrambler -6

no last page: https://e-hentai.org/s/2cdb34ec76/321395-466

Base +6, jfragrettel +8

"I can't marry you, I just want to keep fapping to you everyday." That could have totally ended way worse for him.

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