Translated by SkinSuitLover123. (Not me).

Japanese: https://e-hentai.org/g/992713/9c2770adee/
Korean: https://e-hentai.org/g/1069793/c64b48d0dd/

Part 2 (Japanese): https://e-hentai.org/g/992714/f482b03865/

This is just the plot to Being John Malkovich!

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High expectations for whatever will happen next.

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First page reads a bit oddly (though I know you are not the translator);

'I am Kasuda Asada' Then 'This is the guys older sister'

Is this being told by a narrator, or by Kasuda himself?.

It should probably be 'This is Kasuda Asada' for the first line, or, 'This is my older sister' for the second.

There are also a few instances of 'i' not capitalised.

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The guy who translated this has a few manga translated on his Deviantart. Deviantart is such a pain in the ass to use that I never bothered to read them.

Thanks guy.

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is that comic sans font? it looks suspiciously similar to comic sans.

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It's the seventh and a half floor of the Merton-Flemmer building, and he's John Cusack.

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Once again, a proofreader would've done wonders here. Why don't people look for proofreaders/editors? I mean, I know this guy is on Deviantart, not here, but still...

Wait, half of the shit isn't even translated. Dafuq is this? C'mon, man...

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Pages 7, 9, 12, 13, 15 16, 17, 20, 22, 23 and 24 forgot to translate.

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Why are the inner thoughts not translated? Those are the best parts.

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Could not vote for tag: The tag parody:being john malkovich is not currently valid.

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Oh boy, I remember this one. Its several years old and it doesn't end well for the MC...

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Why does hentai always have to be so unrealistic? A lazy guy who goes and gets a job just because he's told to?

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Part 2: https://e-hentai.org/g/1604752/6bfc8efb13/

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