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(C93) [PigPanPan (Ikura Nagisa)] Yandere Shigure Soushuuhen (Kantai Collection -KanColle-) [English] [Hennojin + CGrascal + =white symphony= + Visible Ninja]

(C93) [PigPanPan (伊倉ナギサ)] ヤンデレ時雨総集編 (艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-) [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2018-03-26 10:22
Parent:1196300
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:142.3 MiB
Length:94 pages
Favorited:950 times
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Average: 4.43

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Posted on 26 March 2018, 10:22 by:   VisibleNinja    PM
Uploader Comment
The entire yandere-shigure tank, including 6 extra pages that until now weren't translated.

Chapter 1+2 translated and edited by CGrascal

Chapter 3 translated and edited by Hennojin (www.hennojin.com/scanslation)

Last 6 pages translated and edited by =white symphony=

Additional editing and translating of Chapter 1 + 2(from CGrascal to modern standard english):

Visible Ninja and his fabulous Gimp-Skillz

EDIT 09/03/18: Changed the typesetting of a few pages and added a revised version of page 20, thanks @Hazardous_Smoke for reporting it to me!

EDIT: 26/03/18: Re-translated and edited Chapter 2

You can contact =white symphony= through their e-mail to commission works you fancy to be translated into english at: whitesymphony63@gmail.com

If you are in need of a editor, feel free to contact me at visibleninja@freenet.de You can also contact me through the forum via PM.

!!!!IMPORTANT!!!!
If you can spare the time, please consider filling out this short reader's opinion survey:

https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSejHrUoMrj_t0xSpf455Ky3x36J180Dt9W4x6IChAJ6xyyHIA/viewform?usp=sf_link

=White symphony= are really interested in your opinion regarding the quality of their work, so your participation would be much appreciated. Thank you in advance.

Should i have made a mistake in crediting one of the groups/individuals involved in this work, please contact me at visibleninja@freenet.de and i will change the credits accordingly.
Posted on 05 March 2018, 17:06 by:   ncc1701z    PM
Score +253
I think the only mistake is not redoing the chapters tainted by cgrascal's hands.
Posted on 05 March 2018, 18:14 by:   VisibleNinja    PM
Score +52
@ncc1701z Although i can understand that, i'm not willing to spend money on a already (if grammatically "debatable") finished translation. If i find the time(means: if i'm really bored), i may proofread and re-typeset these chapters, but please don't count on it.
Posted on 05 March 2018, 19:12 by:   Teh_Red_Guy    PM
Score -31
TBH,I don't see any reason to redo CG's chapters,they look pretty okay to me,this bandwagon must stop,first check the TL and then say that it's junk.

That said,I expect that this will be hard to do for the average circlejerker in this site,so,GG :P
Posted on 05 March 2018, 19:22 by:   VisibleNinja    PM
Score +19
@Teh_Red_Guy Thanks for your "kindness", lel.
Posted on 06 March 2018, 01:34 by:   Darktaka    PM
Score +22
Wow now this was a great Kantai yandere story.
Posted on 06 March 2018, 10:24 by:   Faeldrin    PM
Score +152
@Teh_Red_Guy
The "circlejerk" is the result of like a decade of consistently releasing crappy TL. One exception does not change the rule.
Besides, I did check a few pages before writing this. It begins fine but then CGR soon forgets the correct grammar for questions, again. No real reason to give him a pass on this one.

That said, I completely understand why someone wouldn't want to redo those chapters.
Posted on 07 March 2018, 11:45 by:   VisibleNinja    PM
Score +25
Working on the typesetting btw. Could someone give me a suggestion what Font CGRascal is using? Seems a little bit like Comic Sans MS, and it looks really similar when i use it, but not quite.

EDIT: Okay, after some experimenting i got it. Its Comic Sans MS, with fontsize around 25 and bold.

EDIT 2: First Chapter is finished and published. Since i started editing manga not long ago, i highly encourage you to criticize my work so i can hone my skills.

EDIT 3: Second Chapter finished and published
Last edited on 26 March 2018, 10:38.
Posted on 09 March 2018, 19:09 by:   Hazardous_Smoke    PM
Score +15
Sorry quick comment, didn't know if anyone noticed that page 10 is missing text. Just thought I'd mention it.
Also I wish that "I'm the only one for you" thing was corrected. I believe it is backwards. He should be the only one for her, and she should not be the only one for him. Because she is saying that she only has him as an option, but he has girls other then her as an option. Mind you, I didn't read the original Japanese version (too tired). Even if the original does say something close to what is written, it isn't correct in English.
Last edited on 09 March 2018, 19:28.
Posted on 09 March 2018, 19:37 by:   VisibleNinja    PM
Score +7
@Hazardous_Smoke You're right, apparently i uploaded the wrong version. Thanks for reporting it. I'll also see about the mentioned part. I wanted to change it originally, but failed to come up with an adequate formulation.

EDIT: Done, i also altered my typesetting style, to match CGrascal's.
Last edited on 09 March 2018, 20:48.
Posted on 29 March 2018, 13:15 by:   Fonek    PM
Score +8
Damn this is gold I like yandere girls but this doujiin is like top1 and the ending where Admiral goes yan for Shigure it's amazing.
Posted on 02 April 2018, 11:36 by:   NDestiny    PM
Score +20
Shouldn't you use the Soushuuhen cover instead?
Posted on 08 March 2019, 20:54 by:   OrcaChow    PM
Score +7
You know shits gonna go down when you have the tags 'cheating' and 'military' together.

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