back at it again translating Hirno work.
I wish Hirno-sensei make more of these tentacle stuff :<

edit: sorry i didn't notice some typo until now. wish i can fix it though. but seem like i can't edit the page once it's published :(

was so focusing on ''your'' ''you're'' ''can't'' ''don't'' focusing too much on the Apostrof that i mess up and put it on ''boob's'' insted of ''boobs''

page15 should've been ''went'' insted of ''when'' too. and mayby should've used the word ''seedbed'' insted of ''nursery bed'' too, the word didn't come too me when i was working on it 4-5 hour straight none stop and it was finish at 3am at the time. my head was not in the game. my bad.

i don't have any patreon page or some any other donation site anywhere, and this one was not even on bounties.
i'm just a simple fan of Hirno-sensei craft and want to let other people know and enjoy it too.

18 tags under female
20 pages
Oh boy, it's going to be one of THOSE hentai.

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Getting a proofreader is super important, broski.

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The English could definitely use some work.

Dear translators, if your first language isn't English, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE get a native speaker to proofread for you.

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To be fair, native speakers are usually the first ones to accept dumb mistakes like "should of been" or confuse stuff like "their/they're" (happens in French too). Being native is more of an advantage when judging the flow of the conversation or the choice of words IMO.

But yeah, this would benefit from a bit of proofreading. Especially all those plurals missing an "s".

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@Faeldrin
Plurals missing an "s"? I figured out where they went. ---> Page 11 "NOT MY BOOB'S" .... I got you, bro. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

(Also in other assorted "boob's" throughout the doujin)

Page 13/14. It's funny how quickly she goes from "OH NO I GOTTA GET AWAY" to seconds later "I just realized I want that cock... Screw the mission!" I mean I guess it's because of what he came inside of her just then, but damn that's pretty fast acting, lol.

Anyway, jokes aside, thanks for your work on the translation, Kimochi-san. It's a pretty nice Hirno work and at the very least it will now be much easier to get out a finished product for this if wanted.

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sorry i didn't notice some typo until now. wish i can fix it though. but seem like i can't edit the page once it's published :(

was so focusing on ''your'' ''you're'' ''can't'' ''don't'' focusing too much on the Apostrof that i mess up and put it on ''boob's'' insted of ''boobs''

page15 should've been ''went'' insted of ''when'' too. and mayby should've used the word ''seedbed'' insted of ''nursery bed'' too, the word didn't come too me when i was working on it 4-5 hour straight none stop and it was finish at 3am at the time. my head was not in the game. my bad.

i don't have any patreon page or some any other donation site anywhere, and this one was not even on bounties.
i'm just a simple fan of Hirno-sensei craft and want to let other people know and enjoy it too.

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Always read the written/typed line over to check if it at least sounds correct to find errors. The basics of writing lessons in English. I can't blame those if English isn't their first language, but those who learned English first, it's embarrassing. Even in hentai, sometimes poor grammar turns people off.

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English, do you speak it ?

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In this Doujin: A Game of Dark Heresy gets...Slannesh. Very very Slannesh.

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@giftz
you cant resist when the alien shoot the juice up your ass man, you just cant

its like drink alcohol with your ass like ''Jackass'', its enter your blood faster and get drunk faster.

in this case you get horny faster

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