Do not hesitate to give me your advices and criticisms about this story (Art and Storyline). What you like, what you don't like etc etc... Enjoy and have a good reading!

I think thi is promising. The girls are gorgeous, the situation's sexy: you are doing a good job, mate :)

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From a rendering point, it all looks great; layout of the panels and all.

Wish I could do as well, but my poor system nearly crashes when I try to use a lot of Iray textures in an image (like the wet/sweat look you have here).

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You’ve got all the talents your comics are so good I would pay for them 👍

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Thanks for your replies, guys, I'm glad you like it :)

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Pinkparticles is back!!! It is a good time to be alive!

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Quality is top nodge. But so much teasing lately and only a few are completely finished. (Not only from you)

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I love the bonus pics and I love the story! Looking forward to more updates!

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Looks really good! Just dont like the design of the glasses girl^^

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Will there be a chapter 2 ?

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Yep, of course, there will definitely be a chapter two. It is on his way right now :)

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When will we read it?

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