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Man and wife like this 'Trainer' and his videos. They agree to have the wife trained by him. In the second chapter, the training has been going on for two months. The husband learns that his wife went beyond what they agreed to and fucked at least 20 other people (and sucked off 50) per the Trainer's command. She's also pregnant with someone's child (though not the husband, as the Trainer forbade the wife from fucking him from the start).

I love the art. The story, for me, falls apart in the second chapter. The time jump makes the change too sudden, which makes everything look ridiculous.

@eric0contact
Apart from having the same author, that work is unrelated to this one.

Last edited on 29 April 2018, 17:16.

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Page 19 is hilarious. Xzibit would be proud.

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@nowittycomment
Yea, seems like author coped out on this one, thx for the explanation, I was quite confused by the development the story took from 1 to 2 as well.

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Soooo, is the training finished yet?

I find this particular type of NTR story odd. I would expect the trainer to move on to train other women by the end of it, while the MH he trained, goes off on her own forms of debauchery. But, they tend to stick around in these stories.

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Hi everyone.

Is the first chapter on Ehentai ? that one ? : https://e-hentai.org/g/911387/d85f996ec7/ ?

And does someone know if a team is already on it ... Even if editing seems pretty tough I could get an eye on it...;-)

See ya.

R-IC

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Cop out is harsh. They're two independently serviceable NTR stories that differ drastically in tone and pacing. I can understand that a lot of people who'd like the first story are also probably the type to appreciate the details of the scenario gradually escalating. But some can also enjoy stories like the second with zero context, let alone an abrupt timeskip. This artist seems to gravitate towards either end of the spectrum and less with the in between process, though I suppose you could argue there's some value in the juxtaposition.

Honestly unless an erotic story REALLY goes out of its way to not have the typical plot progression or characters, I don't really hold it to any objective standards of pacing. Because you're not just pacing out events and information, but also types and degrees of sexual stimulus. More often than not it's the latter that takes priority, and standards regarding that are all extremely suggestive.

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司马调教师？
笑川san的副业？

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