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[PonkPank] Breaking of the Sun. Prologue: Fallen Princess (My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic) [English] [WIP]

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Posted on 18 July 2017, 02:45 by:   Ogodei-Khan    PM
Score +114
Rainbow bush, lol.
Posted on 02 August 2017, 01:17 by:   Geoff    PM
Score -6
I do hope that the Caribou get what's coming to them in the end, they all need to be blown up into little piece's and put through a meat grinder for what they did to the Mares in these comics.
Posted on 02 August 2017, 02:54 by:   castlebravo    PM
Score +134
Jeez, only Bronies could get this indignant over porn.
Posted on 02 August 2017, 06:04 by:   Z-Byte    PM
Score +75
This thing pushes all the right buttons, but the wing and horn mutilation always make the whole series pretty unfappable for me.
Posted on 03 August 2017, 05:02 by:   jacobtrue    PM
Score +51
Oh look, a new chapter. Comment shit storm commencing in 5, 4, 3, 2...
Posted on 03 August 2017, 06:07 by:   Abaddon24    PM
Score +9
This shit never ends
At first try to fight whit yours, but come to the conclusion that it is useless to try to change the psyche of a person, much less that of thousands.
But whatever, this end up dying sooner or later.
Posted on 01 September 2017, 08:08 by:   Raish    PM
Score +60
One of the most interesting comics on the site. Thanks!
Posted on 04 September 2017, 00:24 by:   Triforce777    PM
Score +114
Guys, this is a story in which a giant crystal dong is a major plot point. Taking this seriously is like taking North Korea seriously
Posted on 10 September 2017, 03:48 by:   CaptainCatfish    PM
Score +86
Hahahahahahahaha How The Fuck Is Getting Angry Over Pony Porn Real Hahahaha Nigga Just Jack Off To Something Else Like Nigga Close The Tab Haha
Posted on 15 September 2017, 17:37 by:   blakfayt    PM
Score +13
Triforce777 and CaptainCatfish, the same shit I said at the bottom of my first comment. There's five or six people in a Skype group right now, some of them fairly well known artists, deciding what goes into this shit at a story level. There are about five people discussing this shit in much more detail than I ever have or will, and they're being totally serious, like authors who sit and contemplate their latest novel. So if they're going to put that much thought into this pile of poor writing, then I'm at least going to show up once and a while and go, "Look at how stupid and shitty this is. Five people put their heads together and came up with a less interesting story than a Michael Bay movie, and without any of the special effects to make up for it."
Posted on 27 September 2017, 02:33 by:   Enkia Samoon    PM
Score +16
Gonna admit It's an alright thing to beat off to but low key the story,plot, and art is ass not to hate but it's a bit of a turn off. Like lol how r u gonna go from shaded to non shaded like you thought we weren't gonna catch that
Posted on 27 September 2017, 03:18 by:   Geoff    PM
Score -4
With that newest page I would think the next thing that would happen is the males hear snapping coming from Celestia and Luna as the gags are spit out of their mouths, their bonds are broken and their wings freed along with new horns on their heads, right after that they look at each other and nod and suddenly vanish, the next thing that would happen is the evil King Dainn would have two arms sticking out of his chest from the two Princesses as they are standing behind him and ramming their arms through his body. Of course this is all what I would think would happen, whatever the author has planned for this comic is up to him.
Posted on 27 September 2017, 12:09 by:   macaco111    PM
Score +22
always enjoyable to watch butthurt people rant over other peoples tastes
Posted on 28 September 2017, 15:27 by:   blakfayt    PM
Score +3
I'm not butthurt personally. I don't even watch this show any more, and I haven't for like four years now. The art and story is just bad. It's fucking awful, and yet I got daily messages from fans of it over on a pony site with people complaining that I didn't like their, and again I do quote, "Interesting new universe." The guy who makes this himself didn't have anything to say to me, but frankly the fans of this poorly written, poorly planned, patchwork shit show fired first. All I'm doing now is continuing to point out that this "universe" has more holes in it than a brick of cartoon Swiss cheese, and if you like the fetish that's fine, this isn't directed at you. It's literally all about the rabid asshats that think I'm just mad, or that it's me hating a fetish. News flash, I search "rape" and "slaves" here more than most users. I just don't like badly written trash, because I used to write badly written trash. If the guy who makes this ever wants to try again I'd be happy to see him try it, but since he's got four or five people in a group working on this and it still has plot holes galore, I doubt it would improve.
Posted on 28 September 2017, 18:09 by:   27midgarnegro84    PM
Score +10
i understand thyan because is adult comics we can do anything, but please, at least be originals, a lot of other stories have the same plot (revenge, transformation, magic inmune)

is not about the hentai thing, is about be originals
Posted on 01 October 2017, 19:40 by:   blakfayt    PM
Score -4
That's basically the point, 27midgarnegro84. It's porn, and if this tickles your fancy more power to you, but be aware there are people who see it as MORE than porn. People who see this as some kind of magical fantasy AU that has merit beyond beating their meat and have not only defended it but attack other people for not liking it when it's frankly the same stereotypical "My super awesome OC is immune to magic and has all of the super powers, and and he fucks ALL OF THE GIRLS YOU LIKE because he's so cool." And if you're the kind of person that's never complained about a blatant edgy OC, awesome job. But if you have, and most people who look at porn HAVE complained about unoriginal over powered self inserts, that's what this fucking caribou is. King dipshit is a blatant author self insert cleverly disguised by not putting him in every single image ever made. To a point that I'm aware the commissioner of the original Fall of Equestria images was engaged in sexual roleplay with someone who pretended to be corrupted Twilight. So I just come by now and again to remind people of that. The "King" here is a Gary Stu self insert designed for the author to get his jollies and the only reason anyone thinks any differently about it is because he's not the one that's always fucking the girls.
Posted on 03 October 2017, 22:29 by:   jacobtrue    PM
Score +52
@blakfayt I'm confused, why the hell do you care? There's a million fan wank porn comics on this site, a lot of it MLP and much of it offensive garbage, but most people just fucking ignore them and move on. You can give a shit or not, but you seem to really want to have this both ways, and it makes you come off as much of a weirdo if not more than the people who wrote and drew this trash.
Posted on 24 November 2017, 09:00 by:   blakfayt    PM
Score -10
jacobtrue, every time I go, "Oh look, more stupid" people get offended. And again, Gary Stu characters usually get a lot of flak for the exact shit going on in this story, but this one gets a pass? I'd laugh but it's not that funny because it's just as confusing for me as I probably seem to you. I don't care about this thing in the way of like, "I'M MAD BECAUSE PONIES ARE BEING MISTREATED AND THIS ISN'T MY FETISH!" Most of this IS my fetish, but there's this retarded plotline going on and a big dumb Gary Stu involved. And instead of shit like this getting the usual "Ugh, Gary Stu OP bullshit" comments, it gets people praising it, making up fucking fan theories, at one point over 800 members in a group on Derpibooru. So, am I upset about this? Not really, I'm confused why trash gets fans like this and feel a civic duty to remind people that this is, in fact, badly written, OC Gary Stu crap. That's it. It's sort of like people who don't hate the Twilight books, but will still explain to you why it's garbage. It just seems more insane because this is porn, but even then it's worse than porn. In the last story for example, the king got a blowjob, and didn't even have a facial reaction to orgasming. He's so fucking cool you guys he doesn't even react when getting laid. OH MAN DICK IS SO HARD THINKING ABOUT HOW AWESOME HE IS.
Posted on 23 January 2018, 08:43 by:   lightningbarer    PM
Score +12
Y'know what makes me laugh so hard about all of this, every triggered little Brony commenting that this should die - that ended this tumblr run, like they did with Molestia - they are all perfectly fine with futa rape from BakuHaku, gender swapping mindbreaking from Saurian, and straight up child porn with stuff from Anibaruthecat, but when it comes to Fall of Equestria, suddenly its going to far and is something that should end.

Heaven forbid that ARTWORK done not offend some silly little sensibilities you have.

But what I actually think its got something to do with is that the female leaders of the show are controlled, dominated and used by men, that some end up liking it and having their minds broken by it, some genuinely like it to begin with and some will always fight it.

THAT is going too far for some reason and is beyond the level of decency, even though "the story" shows how different certain people are with their fetishes.

You'll sit there complaining about this because you don't want your silly female power fantasy to be broken and cry about it. That's the problem with Fall of Equestria. And I won't bother trying to give reasons why I'm advocating for this, as I'll just be labelled a hater or misogyist for it so fuck it, I don't care.
Posted on 23 January 2018, 20:14 by:   Dafez2    PM
Score +1
Honestly I didn't want to post any firther comment to this, because all that could be possibly be said about FoE has already been said(is porn, as long as you don't take too seriously you will be fine).
I just wnat to point out how irrelevant males are in this fantasy scenario, ALL of them. They all have the same expression most of the time, and well they don't seem to enjoy that much, their smirks and grins made me think to Funky Winkerbeam patented heavylidded grin of inner despair. Hell Dannain himself has never ever smiled since in ANY picture of him, he is winning beyond level and yet he look like bored the hell out of himself....Ain't it ...weird?
Posted on 23 January 2018, 23:22 by:   lightningbarer    PM
Score -23
@Dafez2
Haven't seen any comments you posted on this page, but you might have deleted them so who knows.

Anyway, the point of the comics aren't to have the male be central, they're meant to be female central and to see the female break from the sex they are having, to give in and fall in love with the cock.

Its a male power fantasy and apparently, as the righteous people think allowing men fantasies about having women on the receiving end of this type of behaviour (the sexual dominance behaviour) is a horrible thing, who have tried before and will undoubtedly again try to get this removed because "its sick and wrong" - while being all the happier to fap to futa rape, rape of kids, mind control, as long as those pesky men aren't involved in any way, its fine.

And people wonder why the Brony community turned to shit.

Oh and @cm4000 if you've got issue with something I've said, nut the fuck up and reply like a grown up would, don't bitch out by reeing all over the place, you beta cuck.
Posted on 24 January 2018, 20:04 by:   blakfayt    PM
Score -10
@lightningbarer: Naw, it doesn't have anything to do with the fetish, it's how poorly written it is at the end of the day. It's how the caribou are Gary Stu OCs that had their own island, that blew up, and some how conquered an entire content inside of a year because the author said so that's why. Non Creepy Nickname, the guy who made this hilarious cuck fest of porn, bans people who think this isn't well written. It has reached a point where the people who like this have completely abandoned him and his idea for another version ran by someone else entirely.

There's other issues with it of course. Like for being a typical male power fantasy, all of the stallions are ALSO mind raped. You don't get to be in charge, you're mind controlled. How is that sexy? The only character in this series that has his mind is the king, Non Creepy Nickname's personal stand in, who also has god powers, and princesses to fuck without question, and that doesn't even tackle the out of character bits in the stories on Fimfiction. I very much enjoy a good slave fantasy, being in control, but this isn't ME in control, this is the AUTHOR in control. This is Non Creepy Nickname's specific power fantasy of being the king and the rest of us are his mind broken slaves, again that includes the males. The "Crystal cock" makes the males in this series into what they are, they don't choose to be like this. It's brainwashing. As a dominant, I don't see the appeal in being forced to rape others.
Posted on 25 January 2018, 00:31 by:   lightningbarer    PM
Score +3
@blakfayt
Sure it is dude, sure it is, that’s why – like Molestia – it was taken down from Tumblr and nearly scrubbed from the internet. There’s no “this is wrong and shouldn’t be here because we have our ideas” is it? I mean do I hear the same level of crap from you guys for – say – Chrysalis Leitmotif, where the Queen of the Changlings can suddenly control tentacles, generate dicks on herself, fuck good characters into compliance and then give them Futa dicks as well?
This is porn, if you’re looking for a detailed plot, I’d start looking up porn parodies online, some of them are way better than the things they’re taking the piss out of. While this and other things, including the one I just mentioned, is spank bank material. No major detailed plot in it.
Oh and when the former evil genius who despite not being an Alicorn can know and do spells just as well as an alicorn, out fight her completely, get a redemption and then have at least half of 2 seasons of the fucking show be about her, you’ve got no grounds to complain about Mary Sue-ish characters in porn.

And? The guy is a dick, there’s a lot of them online you know…
Like the asshats going “this is wrong and needs to disappear because I don’t like it”

The point of a mindbreak porno isn’t about how the breaking occurs, its about the fact that the woman breaks and begins loving the dick. Do you think that people think themselves Orcs in things like Erona and the Orcs? Giant Demons with a million tentacles in Sacred Flower? No, they see a once arrogant and overconfident woman humbled and then turned into a sex slave.
In a situation where a society runs on the control of how women interact with men on a sexual level, seeing the reverse of that is a very hot thing. For instance, I don’t know whether you're for XX or XY but lets say for convenience that you’re XY.
Do you believe that if you are in a bar and walk up to a stranger who is a girl and ask her for sex, you’ll get any reaction other than a slap, a drink thrown in your face and possibly being thrown out? Reverse the Sex on that whole play, do you think any guy would get annoyed at that and throw a fit?
No, because we men don’t have the luxury of choice when it comes to sex, women do.
And that’s where this fantasy comes in, its where the men walk up and fuck the living shit out Celestia and she likes it, doesn’t complain and wants more.
I hate to break it to you dude, but every control fetish comic/story/doujin/whatever is the Author in charge, they’re the one directing the plot, they’re the one making the choices of where to go and what to do. Just because you’re allowing that to be proxy in control doesn’t mean anything other than anything else, that’s the point of porn, the fantasy of it all.
You can argue semantics all you want, the ultimate reason people have a problem with this is because the female leads, all of them, are turned into sex slaves begging for cock, they’re not brainwashed, they’re just fucked into subservience.
Just like all other control feish porn. Your problem – and the problem of the whole Brony community with it, is that you don’t want to see the female power fantasy turned on its head. If this were the opposite like saying the Griffins took Equestia, turned all the males into sex slaves, I put money down none of you would bat an eyelid, because the women are in charge and that’s good.
Posted on 25 January 2018, 01:37 by:   blakfayt    PM
Score -46
@lightningbarer: Go to FiMfiction, search "Fall of Equestria" and LITERALLY READ THE SEVERAL DOZEN COMMISSIONED STORIES DETAILING THIS COMIC. You're wrong, you are literally wrong about half of everything you said about this piece. The males in this story are under mind control, the women are forced into arousal with magic and machines, King Dainn or whatever stole the magic from DISCORD, A LITERAL IN UNIVERSE GOD. They landed in a small town with a force of a few hundred, enslaved the town, blocked Luna's dream magic, attacked the Crystal Empire during a blizzard (Even though ponies control the weather so why was there a blizzard), corrupted the Crystal heart into a penis shape that corrupts the minds of males, and then some how got a small army into Canterlot, King deer beat Celestia in single combat, then Twilight got so stressed out she gave up, ratted out the remaining ponies who were then captured, and now every single pony is a slave. THIS IS CANON TO FALL OF EQUESTRIA. Someone other than me wrote this in a series of stories on FiMfic. GO READ THOSE BEFORE SAYING THERE'S "no story" to this trash.

Now, because I know you WON'T go search those stories and see chapter after chapter that doesn't focus on sex or mind break and instead focuses on how strong and powerful the caribou are and how utterly weak, helpless, and stupid the ponies are, I'll quickly talk about your other points. Who the fuck is Chrysalis Leitmotif? I don't know who that is, what that is, it sounds dumb as fuck though. Ponies making male griffons slaves? No, I would be entirely against that. I am against any brutal depictions of slavery in porn. It's fantasy, it should stay fantasy. This horn chopping wing clipping shit is DARK, as is the destruction of an entire nation for the sake of getting some pussy or some dick. As for the show and Mary Sue characters, yeah, it's for kids. This isn't. It's for adults, and again has several fucking stories and a dozen author's worked on it, and it's still trash. I will also of course say that I think the show went down hill during season 2 and never recovered, so I don't know fuck all about anyone being as strong as an alicorn and then getting a redemption. That also sounds dumb as fuck.

The entire brony community turned against this for having a shitty story and the guy who made it is a complete fucking cock about his precious porn. You have a problem with bronies. I'm not one of them. Not any more. I hate the fucking brony community because they're a bunch of misanthropic teenage edgelords that create trash like Fall and then defend it for being "interesting" when it's just badly written porn.

Oh, and you very clearly have some delusions about women I'd suggest you get addressed, but being an overt cuck is probably all you aspire to be.
Last edited on 25 January 2018, 02:37.
Posted on 25 January 2018, 08:44 by:   lightningbarer    PM
Score -33
@blakfayt

This is porn and in porn, there’s a corruption fetish out there to see characters become something they’re not, giving into darkness and enjoying it.
So the story – in your opinion – is shit, does that matter in the long run? Chis-Chan had his abortion out there for a long time(you can still find it I think) as did Linkara, as does any number of the current list of actual Marvel writers…and anything on Steven Universe, yeah that’s utter dog shit.

See, I don’t need to read anything as I am not defending it, this is the stupidity of people today, you say you don’t want something taken down because of feelings, people then say you’re defending it and want to see the horrible things that go on in it and suddenly you’re a fan and enjoying it.
Anyone who does a logic jump like that is a fucking moron, so congrats on that.
To sum things up for you.
You do not dictate what is or is not good and allowed on the online space, if you don’t like it, ignore it and if enough do this, then it’ll disappear.

Chrysalis Leitmotif is a comic shown here on e-Hentai and on Hentai Foundry, link is available now: https://e-hentai.org/g/1057215/dd5c17c68e/

I state again before you get all offended, if you don’t like it, ignore it and move on, don’t go righteous and try and destroy it as you’re just proving that you’re easily offended and need to make the world look the way you want because you’re autistic. So yeah, don’t go banning things, walk out the door, walk over to a starbucks and buy a chai latte and a blueberry muffin.

On to the whole GRIFFINS and FEMALE PONIES making the males sex slaves, a sort of inversion of the whole FoE trope, I doubt you’d hate it as its showing female dominance of the main characters, and seeing a dark twisted reflection of the mane 6 has shown a very positive response in the Brony community if things like Cupcakes HD, Smile HD, pony.mov series and Rainbow Factory are any evidence and those are just the main known versions. I didn’t mention Cheerilee’s garden, Absentia or Sweet Apple Massacre. So yeah I think you’re Bullshitting there, I think the problem you have is that it’s the mane 6 being defeated easily by some unknown enemy and turned into dribbling cock sleeves.

Okay you’re playing dumb… guess I have to name her. Starlight Glimmer.

The entire Brony community turned against this because some of them made a stink about this being awful because of a list of bullshit reasons, I’ve given enough evidence in these comments that when it’s the women doing the controlling, you’re more than happy to fap it and demand it keep going. Hell “Night Mares” was supposed to end after the mane 6 all were defeated, but you just pestered until you got a continuation.
There’s no reason other than “its guys” causing this anger, the story is as ludicrous as any other porn story or comic, there’s a guy on Hentai Foundry called Tymestalker who has written an 11 chapter story – up to now – on Kingdom Hearts and the corruption of Kairi. According to you something like this “shouldn’t exist” for similar reasons.

You don’t dictate how the world works, regardless of how you’ve been told you’re important, you’re not. You’re just as insignificant as the rest of us, you’re not special or interesting in any way, you are just a person who is continuing down towards the eventual death we all are awaiting. Nothing you do is worthwhile.

You have no idea what being a cuck is, do you. Well okay. A cuck is someone who enjoys seeing their wife/girlfriend fucked by someone else, there’s an entire genre of it here on e-hentai, search Netorare.
Anyway, stating a fact that if a woman were to walk into a bar and ask 10 guys one after another if they wanted to have sex, one of them is bound to say yes.
If a guy were to say the same to women, do you REALLY believe that he’d eventually get a yes from them and not called a pig and have a drink thrown in his face?
Posted on 25 January 2018, 15:02 by:   blakfayt    PM
Score -24
I know what a cuck is, and you're very definitively one. You're making a FUCK TON of assumptions about me and what I want and what I think and I'd suggest you stop. I didn't like Night Mares, I don't like Cupcakes, Smile, the .Mov series, or Rainbow Factory. So... yeah, you're wrong. I never said I want to ban this, I said I pop in now and then to remind people that the STORY THAT EXISTS BEHIND THIS PIECE is fucking stupid and the author is more autistic than the entire Brony fandom put together in a single room. Because if you say this story doesn't make sense, the story he wrote, he will talk shit about you, block you, and turn what little fanbase he's got on you. I know, because he got people on FiMfic to send me death threats for pointing out how absurd it is a non magical being "stole" Discord's magic, and was so good with it he defeated four alicorns. You, once more, need to stop making so many weak assumptions.

I'd like you to point to me where I EVER said this "Shouldn't exist." You're pulling words out of thin air, putting them into my mouth, and then crying about it. And for someone with a base ass nihilist view in the middle there, you seem very interested in arguing over porn. More so than I do, which really I'm arguing the stupidity of the source material, the fan fictions of this, than its existence. If this were more well written, or didn't have the massive backstory about HOW the ponies were conquered, it WOULD be just as stupid as everything else. Unfortunately someone decided to write an entire fic about the caribou's military exploits, putting the porn second, and that's dumb. You're defending this stuff's right to exist, fine, I'm saying it shouldn't be so fucking stupid. If it's porn Non Creepy Nickname shouldn't have paid people to write non porn about it.

I'm also not playing dumb. I know the character from fan art but not the show. I haven't watched the show since Trixie came back evil in Season 3. Sounds really fucking stupid though that she can fight an alicorn. Of course I always rolled my eyes at the way the writers put Celestia and Luna as gods (Literally, Faust said that was their intended position) and then every ten seconds they're the damsel in distress for Twilight to save. The original Mary Sue. The show's dumb as hell, but the source being dumb doesn't excuse making something just as or even dumber. Two wrongs don't make a right.

And, to finish off with your weird obsession with women throwing drinks, don't ask women in a bar if they want to have sex. Approach women in places that aren't bars, go on a date, and have a relationship. I've gotten plenty of sex from girls NOT at bars by not being a fucking creepy and just walking up and asking for sex. That's just weird, dude. Seriously, look into hooking up in places that aren't bars. Quality of life, and pussy, goes way up.

Afterthought edit: And for saying this was "virtually wiped from the internet" there seems to be new pictures added to the Fall of Equestria tag on Derpibooru every couple of months, and Derpibooru has a "If you don't like it, don't comment" clause on their ToS, to protect shit like this from the people you complain about. Sounds like you need to get out more than just in real life, maybe explore some other websites too. No one is stopping this from being made, you're just going to catch shit for doing it and most people are pussies when it comes to public opinion.
Posted on 25 January 2018, 17:38 by:   lightningbarer    PM
Score -33
@blakfayt

Oooh….what’re you gonna do to me? Oh dear, that’s scary! Lol
Of course you don’t likethese things and as you speak for the Brony community, they don’t either, ignore the tones of videos, artwork, stories written about the things, they don’t matter do they, because you know better than everyone else and know what should and shouldn’t be allowed. Right?
Why do that, if you hate the idea of this, why not just let it be, you’re giving it views by being here. Moron, the consensus isn’t even with you, its at 3 stars liking, that’s over 50% of people voting up than down. So do everyone a favour and fuck. Off.
What you mean like Tirek did? Like that canon character did after this was already out? Likethat guy?
And boo-hoo, you got death threats, I hope you went to the police and FBI with them like a big boy, because if you didn’t, they weren’t death threats, they were just people taking the piss out of you sperging all over the place because the pretty pink princess got a dick up her ass and liked it.
Here’s the funny part, I never implied YOU did, I said “people like you” and “you people”, you know, the overly sensitive, easily offended, whiny, butt-hurt little fuckbois who cannot take anything not being 100% their own way that they have to break that thing if they don’t get their way.
But then “I think he doth protest too much” is applicable here.
no you see, I don’t like little assholes like you trying to censor people because of how upset you feel, the world isn’t here to pander to your feelings, bitch. You need to grow up, stop drinking your soy latte’s and start eating some red meat, y’know like a real person does who isn’t a pussy.

You forgot a whole three words in the little bit about the story of Caribou being military geniuses.
“In” “Your(my)” “Opinion”
Because that’s all it is, you can sit there and say its shit all you’d like, but in the end its just your shitty thoughts and actions trying to end something.
I don’t care, it’s a lame idea as a comic and its badly drawn, but I’ll be damned if “people like you”(see, I did it again :D) are going to shut this down because you “don’t like it.” Fuck off with that crap, you don’t like it, go to tumblr and enjoy the circle jerking leftist bullshit over there.

Twilight was never a Mary Sue you moron, she fucked up all the freaking time, she had to learn things and get help from her friends, that’s the antithesis of a Mary Sue. You want a Mary Sue, go watch The Last Jedi, Rey’s a perfect one.

No you see that’s the point I’m making, a guy needs to do all that to get even the hint of a pussy.
But would a woman? If a woman were to walk into a bar and said “I want to have sex with you.” To 10 guys, she would get a yes eventually, because its not on the guy to say “no” its on the woman. Thanks for proving that point.

Yeah, that’s the point, you people tried to destroy it and people said “fuck you no” because they – like me – don’t like controlling dictatorial little assholes like you trying to say what should and shouldn’t be allowed online.

So in a final thing, if you don’t like this, FUCK OFF and don’t come back. If you hate it, create a Tumblr or dA group about it and enjoy talking to your peers, people who cry endlessly over a porn plot that wasn’t well written.

that’s why I reply to everything you state and don’t hold back, yeah I’m a pussy beta cuck mangina who hates women because I’m a permavirgin living my my mums basement with cheeto dust on my shirt 24/7 right?

Anything to make your autistic world view feel a little more stable, huh. Here’s a better idea, don’t talk to anyone, that way no one can disagree you’re not a loser idiot who can’t even argue on anything properly and is a waste of life.
Posted on 25 January 2018, 20:29 by:   blakfayt    PM
Score -46
Jesus fucking Christ. You call me a sperg and then go off on a rant about bronies for a half a page while saying Twilight wasn't an obvious Mary Sue. XD Fuck outta here with you and your "alpha male" idiocy. I'm going to keep coming back and bitching about this because YOU are the people I like pissing off. I FUCKING LOVE watching retards like you rant about "dictators on the internet" trying to "Shut down free speech" or whatever nonsense. It's hilarious. So, let's keep going.

I eat red meat almost exclusively, and I hate lattes, as well as soy products, because I'm guessing your lame ass was implying "soyboy" like a proper cuckhold that doesn't know how to actually please a woman.

"In my opinion." No, in reality. People who LIKE THIS have complaints with the story on FiMfiction. There is an entire group that is dedicated to making a whole alternate universe to this that MAKES SENSE. I'm not against them at all. https://www.fimfiction.net/user/79237/Aristagtle Check out some of his criticisms against Fall, and notice how he is WRITING NEW FALL OF EQUESTRIA FICS. I'm on board with someone doing this in a way that MAKES SENSE. I'm not trying to "silence" anyone, and yet you keep not saying "Other people." You people, people like you, implying ME, you dumbass. Don't talk about writing if you can't even handle implications properly. You're not suited for it.

If a guy needs to do that to "get a hint of pussy" (it's more than a hint if you're not a loser) then just hold women to that standard too. Oh wait, you want easy sex without strings attached. Like a slut. Enjoy the disease.

No one tried to "destroy" Fall of Equestria. It's dying on its own because NCN (the creator) is a fuck wagon that drove it into the ground with his own stifling bullshit. Like banning people who think this is poorly written. Again, Aristagtle talks about how NCN fucked everything and does shit that makes no sense. And the tumblr disappeared because Fall of Equestria involves CHILD RAPE which pretty clearly violates tumblr's ToS and is why artists like Anibaru the Cat post them on Pixiv instead. Non Creepy Nickname could have done that too and there would still be a tumblr. You're pushing the blame onto someone other than the creator for this shit failing. Face facts for once, because you haven't done it since you started commenting here. You're the one that can't argue properly. Strawmanning by putting words in my mouth, moving goal posts by saying you "weren't talking about me" and deflecting constantly back to this sad little "Men are so oppressed!" stand point. Classic fallacies.

Edit: God the more I reread your comment the funnier it gets, and a little sad too. You sound so pathetic whining about "leftists" and "Women saying no" and autism.
Posted on 25 January 2018, 21:33 by:   blakfayt    PM
Score -24
Hmm, no tears, Fall of Equestria gets one image a month, roughly, the entire fanbase is against it. Yeah, sorry, you're wrong again. I am with the majority, because this is dying, through a combination of the author being more autistic than you sound, and the majority NOT liking mind break of any kind. You keep talking a real big game and it's going nowhere. No one is TRYING to kill your precious porn, so calm your mantits. SpikexCMC is allowed IF they are animals. The characters in this comic aren't, they're humanized, which does violate Tumblr ToS. Try reading sometime, it might improve your ability to argue too.

What drives me crazy is that, again, you fail to actually address anything and just keep deflecting. It's funny. It's so funny I have shared these comments elsewhere and several people that share your mentality are having a very good chuckle about the fact you've decided to take your voice to porn. I'm here because I'm against the writing in this SPECIFIC thing. Your posts sound like they should be on reddit, with the rest of the right wing snowflakes.

I'm far from an SJW, your thinking I am one is very weak and based on like five comments I've made here where I poke fun at this for having a shitty story. Sounds like you're the one going all "sperg" here.

Also, it's frankly quite obvious you're the one that's never talked to a woman in any setting, and if you have managed to get laid you probably just thrusted in real hard repeatedly like a porno and left her unsatisfied and wishing she HAD thrown a drink on your sorry ass.

You use all the right words to sound like a bad Chad meme. SJWs, triggered, "I'm using logic!" You're the most illogical, pathetic person I've seen on here. And trust me, there's some real "Winners" on the forums here. Final nail here, I never said or implied I would "Do" anything. You're literally fabricating shit that isn't being said. Again, try reading. At this point I'm just here because my comments make you comment, and you're way more upset than I am over this. Fall of Equestria is dying because the creator is an untalented fuck that made some niche porn and got mad when anyone said there was a problem with it. I'm just here to laugh at it until it croaks, and goad the weak willed like you into showing how mentally handicapped you are.
Posted on 27 January 2018, 01:33 by:   lightningbarer    PM
Score -33
@blakfayt

Oh honey you think you matter lol, you don't.

the mere fact that I've brought you back repeatedly to a place you say you hate because you can't take not getting the last word is priceless.

Never actually address anything I've said, I mean if you're consistent, I'll see you complaining about things on all the others I've posted about like Anibaruthecat and Saurian. I doubt it though, because you're blatant in your biases. Enjoy the emasculation porn dude, because we both know if you ever do get laid, its the only way you'd take it, up the ass with a vibrating dildo from the girl who dominates you.
Posted on 02 February 2018, 21:34 by:   jacobtrue    PM
Score +47
@blakfayt Wow, dude, you are really fuckin' sad.
Posted on 28 February 2018, 18:04 by:   Lexander    PM
Score +59
@Blakfyat: "I come to THIS SPECIFIC GALLERY, and any future ones, just to *casually* remind people that Fall of Equestria is stupid because it started back when I cared about ponies,..." wow, how devoid of meaning must your life be to dedicate it to "casually" doing anything. Also, you're using casually wrong.
Posted on 20 May 2018, 17:32 by:   jebilgutay    PM
Score +31
I don't care what the other comments say, I enjoy this. My only complaint is that the last two panels are in black and white. Why are you submitting unfinished work?
Posted on 21 May 2018, 12:23 by:   DocOnHoliday    PM
Score +32
@jebilgutay

Artist doesnt really have the time to draw anymore apparently, so just doesnt panel by panel, uncollored, put its together and thats it. You wont be seeing colored work of this any time soon unless someone else does it, but it probably wont be uploaded here then.
Posted on 22 May 2018, 07:57 by:   blakfayt    PM
Score -34
@ Lexander: Casually, as in, I'm not actively looking for this gallery. I don't search out Fall of Equestria or PonkPank, I type in MLP whenever I'm in the mood to be here (Which isn't frequent. First time I've been back in about two or three months) and if this gallery is on the first page, or any future Fall of Equestria stuff, I'll pop in and leave a comment.

By the way, Fall of Equestria is still stupid, stupid enough that even the people who like it say it's stupid, so joke is literally on everyone saying I'm in the wrong here. Even the fans are on my side, to the extent several of them are trying to rewrite it to make sense. I doubt they'll get far because they seem to be ignoring the fact the caribou are just badly written Gary Stus, but hey, points for trying.
Posted on 21 June 2018, 02:16 by:   anthrofan    PM
Score +19
I love both the teacher's pet and this story, will page 10 and 11 be colored soon or will remain colorless either way I like this story
Posted on 03 August 2018, 02:22 by:   jebilgutay    PM
Score +19
Finally, colored pictures, pity they don't include a new page or two.
Posted on 03 August 2018, 06:07 by:   possum1    PM
Score +48
what's up with the walls of text in this comment section? lol
Posted on 03 August 2018, 08:36 by:   H-Knight    PM
Score +30
The problem is not the sexual fetish(es) &/or Dark themes that Fall of Equestria encompasses; gods know there are far, Far, FAR, worse here on E-Hentai.

The problem that many (not just Bronies) have with FoEquestria is that the base story for it is just plain awful, in terms of its premise and the quality of writing itself. The faux-controversy is made worse because the (misguided) fetish-advocates try to defend their fetish(es) by defending FoEq itself, such as saying that its writing and premise are valid &/or viable.

It isn't.

The writing is terrible.

TERRIBLE.

Advocating FoEquestria's writing is like trying to serve a White Castle hamburger-slider in a steakhouse restaurant as if it were a porterhouse steak; then trying to convince the customer(s) pay for the hamburger-slider at porterhouse steak prices by saying, "Well, they're both made of beef..." ;<

I will say it again for clarity... I have do NOT have any problems with the dark sexual fetish(es) used for Fall of Equestria; just do not advocate FoEquestria itself, in trying to defend those fetishes. That is what riles me up as a Brony, former writer, and occasional fan-fiction editor (for a variety of subjects, not just for MLP).

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2. [EDITED]: And just for (third) clarity, I have nothing against White Castle hamburger-sliders either ;D . Especially when coming home from work at 0200 (AM) and have not eaten anything for most of the day &/or night...

3. [EDITED]: @lightningbarer… See, you reinforced my point, or MISSED my point :( . As I have already stated above (>twice<), I have no problems with the porn fetishes of FoEquestria (or most porn fetishes in-general, really).

Porn, even fan-fiction porn, can have a silly, superfluous, or just plain stupid, plot that no one really cares about, as you stated. However, FoEq advocates are the ones that try to sell you that the writing- & plot-quality of FoEquestria as equal and worthy to MLP:FiM's own Canon. It. Is. Not.

Show me (porn actress) Mia Khalifa in a porn fetish scenario, and I have no problem with it (or her), even if it is not my fetish taste(s). But DO NOT try to sell me that Mia Khalifa is equal in acting quality as the awards-winning Tilda Swinton (hamburger sliders vs. porterhouse steaks, remember?). THAT is what FoEq advocates try to do, in defending their porn fetish by defending FoEquestria, and that is what annoys me to no end. ;<
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Posted on 07 August 2018, 23:45 by:   lightningbarer    PM
Score -12
Well...quite a lot of other people thought @Blakefayt was a sperg. Good.

@H-Knight
I'm gonna ask you a simple question, when you're watching/reading porn, are you there for the plot?
I'm not, I don't think the majority of people are there for the plot. I think the majority find where they want to blam and afterwards, they're done.

So while the plot of FoE is shitty, does that matter in the long run for people who enjoy the mind fuck fetish?

See the whole argument people have tried giving is that its a terrible story. Well no one watches Mia Kalifah for the plot, or Meana Wolf for the plot, no one really cares about that. They like seeing tits and ass and women getting fucked.

Unless you're gay, then its Guys getting fucked and seeing big dicks or a lot of hair apparently?!
Posted on 15 September 2018, 19:10 by:   borenor    PM
Score +70
Most of dodjins here don't make sense if we actually start to consider their originals' settings and characters' personalities outside of utilizing their exterior memorable "images" and associated memes. So who cares?
Posted on 05 October 2018, 20:39 by:   Slartibartfast    PM
Score -19
Right wing trump monkeys and autistics still defending their degenerate fetishes and "muuu free speech" and pretending garbage like this is "better than canon". There is a reason Mary Sue garbage like this is hated and worse than "The Last Jedi" on the Mary sue scale.
Posted on 05 February 2019, 23:11 by:   anthrofan    PM
Score +24
will this comic be continued?
Posted on 04 April 2019, 04:38 by:   imercenary    PM
Score +9
@ anthrofan

Maybe? PonkPank got caught up in the whole "tumblr is nuking everything"-shitstorm and they signed up for "Do Not Post"-restrictions on most MLP sites long ago, so its hard to find current information on his(/her?) works.
Posted on 02 August 2019, 08:29 by:   Ilge Täikubu    PM
Score +6
I think the non-shaded look is better. This series is the best thing ever! When we are done with the sun slut, will we be getting a story about the moon slut or the library slut? I am really lookinf forward to a sequel to "Teacher's pet".
Posted on 01 August 2020, 15:12 by:   bil2361    PM
Score +4
Is this series cancled?
Posted on 21 October 2020, 14:23 by:   possum1    PM
Score +29
if you dont like the story dont read it. theres a SLIGHT chance the remaining 8 billion people in the world dont share your tastes. no one elected any of you pony story connoisseur.

the world doesnt revolve around you, or your tastes.

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