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(C87) [Nukoya (Minamoto Jin)] Mudai (Kuro x Shiro Gal Goudoushi 2) [English] [shakuganexa]

(C87) [ぬこや (皆素人)] 無題 (黒×白ギャル合同誌2) [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2018-05-27 23:32
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Language:English  TR
File Size:19.61 MiB
Length:5 pages
Favorited:742 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.36

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Posted on 27 May 2018, 23:32 by:   shakuganaexa    PM
Uploader Comment
Translated and typeset by me. Comment any grammar errors and I will fix them as soon as possible.
If you enjoy reading this please donate on:
Paypal at shakuganexa@gmail.com
or
ko-fi.com/shakuganexa

I feel so sorry for the girl... But she's really a tuna girl.

This artist instantly caught my eye and I can't believe he is not a big name. I wish he makes a continuation of this, or a one volume remake where we see her virginity being taken. I love the girl's design, more so her attitude. This might be the best hentai short i have ever read.

On a sad note, Minamoto Jin... blocked me in Twitter. I don't know why but I got to say I'm hurt. I think he might have mistook my hate for Jin/MTSP as personal because he does have Jin in his name. If you're reading this 美奈來-san, I apologize and I only have respect for you. It only took four pages for you to become one of my favourite artists. My rants are directed at MTSP and some of his fans who hate me, not to you and your fans.

Any donations I received now until June will be used to acquire works by the author for 8K and HD Rescans. I have no problem retypesetting this again in 8K.

@Adrian_V
FAKKU has already licensed Comic Koh and will be translating that and future serializations by Terasu. I hate MTSP fans because of harassment. Even to this day, my spam box is still receiving hate mails. If you do commission me for the rescanning of the novel omake, I may stop my hate of MTSP.
Posted on 28 May 2018, 01:00 by:   Ratch    PM
Score +302
What a useless story...
Posted on 28 May 2018, 01:10 by:   zarion    PM
Score +38
Is this a sequel of some sort?
Posted on 28 May 2018, 01:12 by:   TastelessWhiskey    PM
Score +172
I ummmm... what was this? I agree with Ratch man was this story useless. Is this NTR? He likes her. She doesn't give a shit about anything. The other guy is just an asshole. This was pointless.
Posted on 28 May 2018, 01:33 by:   crusher330    PM
Score +81
... it's got good art!
Posted on 28 May 2018, 01:37 by:   shakuganaexa    PM
Score +65
It is a rather pointless story but the important part here is the art and the girl's deadpan reactions. There's only so much you can do with 4 pages for an anthology with has some pretty good shorts. If only he could continue this. Even a Fate Grand Order doujin with Nightingale doujin would be awesome.

Oh I will be scanning his COMIC13 FGO doujin... Maybe only to editors because I don't want to be in conflict with this author. So if you're going to translate that, wait for my scans. It will be in 8K and better quality.

@cultt
Can you even read Japanese? Fuck off. Maybe you should try and do something and be releavnt rather than be a keyboard warrior. If anyone is a monkey that would be you, because I'm no monkey, I'm King Kong.
Last edited on 28 May 2018, 11:46.
Posted on 28 May 2018, 02:03 by:   kanoon48    PM
Score +109
before reading: i think this gonna be another awesome H manga!
after reading: err.. what?
Posted on 28 May 2018, 03:03 by:   hentie85    PM
Score +15
Shame, damn nice drawings
Posted on 28 May 2018, 04:11 by:   Bulopu    PM
Score +25
>From Kuro x Shiro Gyaru Goudoushi
Sorry but I don't give that girl my shiro gyaru seal of approval.
Posted on 28 May 2018, 04:16 by:   H0R0    PM
Score +42
Ok, so the dude does not know he is relate by blood to her but she does...
He said that their parent are close and on good terms.
So her mother fucked the dude father.
So when they grow up her mother tell her that the dude is her brother so do not have feeling for him.
The dude is clueless about their blood relate so he fantasy about relationship with her.
She on other hand know he is her brother so doesn't give a fuck about him romantically.
Posted on 28 May 2018, 05:33 by:   Adrian_V    PM
Score +14
@shakuganexa since when (and why) do you hate Jin? weren't you even translating a novel from him a while ago?

Also have you seen this https://e-hentai.org/s/223559c031/1134450-55 ? a full story from terasu!!! want to translate it? xD

EDIT: ah ok, i thought you were referring to the artist himself, and i totally understand you we can be real assholes sometimes xD and lets hopethey do translate it since i see few ntr or even hardcore stuff on fakky these days.......then again Koh wasn't exactly the place i was expecting to see something like that! xD; BTW when was that announced because i am checking the magazines section on fakku and don't see any issue from COMIC Koh right now or in the works..........
Last edited on 29 May 2018, 02:28.
Posted on 28 May 2018, 05:55 by:   cultt    PM
Score +18
Is this a MTL? Done by SEAmonkey?
Posted on 28 May 2018, 06:48 by:   Zix13    PM
Score +32
This story just drop me in the middle of nowhere.....good art tho!
Posted on 28 May 2018, 08:29 by:   aljaurez    PM
Score +26
the story is shit. but good art
Posted on 28 May 2018, 16:33 by:   akunoko    PM
Score +31
this was all kinds of dumb
Posted on 29 May 2018, 16:46 by:   thornscrown    PM
Score +12
sad for too short
Posted on 29 May 2018, 18:40 by:   juu-chan    PM
Score +4
That's one seriously fucked up heroine even by hentai standarts.
Posted on 03 June 2018, 02:35 by:   Adrian_V    PM
Score +6
I was curious and checke dthe raw gallerie, man i think this may be a tame story compared to some of the others.......
Posted on 14 October 2019, 01:46 by:   hentie85    PM
Score +6
will definitely have no sequel but character design 10/10
Posted on 25 September 2022, 09:30 by:   kiwino    PM
Score +13
@H0R0 horo
https://e-hentai.org/g/1185852/37cce59eb8/ multiple post, first you being edgy and no one respond, you try again like a loser
problem with : JK https://e-hentai.org/g/1178707/971f63bda3/ , lesbian (https://e-hentai.org/g/1267710/4bef183c13/), homo https://e-hentai.org/g/785784/430892c915/
Posted on 01 February 2023, 20:58 by:   Vooxoo    PM
Score +10
My guess is that when she discovered he was her brother because her mother cheated she broke inside for having a bad family, possibly hates both family and the neighbor.
Maybe she loved him, but after discovering he was her brother unlike many other stories she killed her feelings for good.
She looked to have emotions only when denying the tanned guy so 1) she really hates her brother, possibly because he is living in blessed ignorance 2) she still loves him and knows she could go with him but must not, fucking the tanned guy is how she is trying to kill her feelings
is a 4 page story so we are probably overthinking it, this author is good

I've re-read it, and is way too complicated for being just 4 pages.
if the TL is correct she is saying that her neighbors are her parents, and for some reason she lives in another house.
I don't get why should that be the case, so I'm guessing is a TL mistake, as weird as it sounds because the translator making a mistake like that seems very weird, is a short story and seems like every sentence is correct.
Why is she living in another house instead of being under the same roof? why MC doesn't knwo she is her sister, why is she emotionless? was it because she killed her love or something else? does she feels any pleasure or is fucking the tanned guy because is what a girlfriend would do, she goes to his house every day with a meal and seems to pay his expenses of her own pocket.

again, is 4 pages and it makes no fucking sense, I'm sorry for the neighbor/brother but want to know why the fuck their family is like that.
is she hated by her family and they put in another house and give money to live but don't do the job of parents?
are they focused on their male heir? and that makes her hate him?
She lied to him that she was eading novel in the night, instead of just saying she have a boyfriend? why, she seems to not care about anything why should him knowing be bad?
unless she knows he loves her and wants to see him going insane after discovering he was fucking some random guy, getting a nice revenge on her parents and the brother that stole their love from her, maybe she being fine with getting pregnant is for that reason too, but knowing how shitty bad parents are she is not going for a child with someone that doesn't want one.
the slightly more optimistic outcome would be she lies because she is still hoping to get with her brother, but is in storng denial for everything around their relationship, he never confessed to her
Last edited on 02 February 2023, 23:39.

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