The writing is terrible, it looks pretty bad. Apart from that, it's not the worst thing ever, but the line art is rather blurry and looks kinda bad, I think sharper and straighter lines would look better. Also, what are those nipples??? The boobs could really use some work, they look pretty goofy. The hands are also pretty bad. Though the faces look surprisingly good, considering the other flaws. Could use some improvement when it comes to the body and writing, especially previously mentioned stuff, but otherwise decent.