Daddy is in for a bad shock when he comes back to his wife.

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pg. 1 lmao that dad's an asshole

pg. 2 "My dad is a real asshole."

character building, man

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Hmm.... Why i do felt it like a rewrite?

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Where's chapter one?

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@MUGENNO SHINDO

It is definitely a rewrite.

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Hmm this reeks of a rewrite but whatever

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what is so rewrite about this? the raw is on the site. looks at it before said it is a rewrite.

Edit: Fucking rewrite. some text was real but this is totally rewrite. we already have a rewrite for 9 year already, now one more rewrite. fuck you!

Last edited on 03 June 2018, 07:57.

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two things

1. this is a rewrite this guy took from my blog site. He whited out my info on page two. Also there is a mark on last page with ez.
2. I find it interesting that because it is not marked rewrite by me it got an average score of 4 from 60+ people at this point.

@elgringo actually a reedit of a rewrite. I have been making my old rewrites look better but I have not been posting them here.

Last edited on 29 May 2018, 22:55.

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A rewrite of a rewrite: https://e-hentai.org/g/160804/e9d8d6b691/

Such wonderful world we are living in.

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That mother looks younger than her own son.

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@EZREWRITER

The quality of your writings is not the reason of why your scores go low. I'm pretty sure your efforts may be very much appreciated in other forums. The reason of such low scores is that readers in this forum appreciate real translations using the scripts of the original authors instead of modifications that may not even have anything to do with the original story. This is how people feel in this forum.

It's really disappointing to find out later on that what was presented as translation turned out to be a 're-imagination' of a story instead of even a bad translation using google translate (machine translation).

I don't think the low scores are a critic of your ability as author, though it reflects the feeling that even a bad translation is better than a good 're-imagination' of a story.

I'm pretty sure that the score for this particular 're-imagination' will go down with time as more people realizes it's a re-write.

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