Wow, after two Chinese, one Korean, one Russian, we finally have one English translation.
Thank you for all the great work~

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Anything with Shiina is A-OK with me! Thanks for the TL!

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Really nice! Thanks alot

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You mixed up the speaker of a lot of speech bubbles. And some perspective pronouns. I guess it was machine translated?

Some mistakes on pg. 3 just to name a few.

エロ同人が描きたいわ
> "I want porn with cat girls."
I want to draw erotic doujin.

調教モノよ
> "I want to use those things."
BDSM type.

話聞けよ! しかも特殊だなおい!!
> "Listen to yourself! This stuff is important! Hey!!"
Listen to me! And why is it the really special type?

漫画の取材に協力して
> "She just wants some help in collecting data for her manga"
Help me gather ideas for my manga.

どうしてってお前な...
> "Why would she" (
You're asking why...?

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Like, I see how you could confuse 猫 (cat) and 描 (draw), but I wouldn't trust a word of translation from someone making that mistake. Might as well call it a rewrite.

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Can you use the original size Raws in the future, please.

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Great material, poor translation.

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