This is a rewrite not a translation. This is a reedited version of one of my old works. I am posting them here as someone has repeatedly gotten blog/websites of mine removed.

raw https://e-hentai.org/mpv/104090/15b94dfbd4/#page124

english translation: https://e-hentai.org/mpv/289121/1bd3381884/#page124

English:
https://e-hentai.org/g/289121/1bd3381884
https://e-hentai.org/s/f6202754f0/289121-124

Japanese:
https://e-hentai.org/g/104090/15b94dfbd4/
https://e-hentai.org/s/cc5ff8fdb0/104090-124

Fixed those links for you so people can actually enjoy the original.

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Dude... adding more shit to the shit doesnt make it better, just make it shittier.

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Reminder that no one wants rewrite shit. Also props to the guy getting your blog/websites removed. There's someone doing some actual good.

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Why the hate?

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I like how you've also included a comic sans version.

Troll level: 9000

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Everyone hates EZrewriter....
wtf is he doing on this site still.

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I have no problem with rewrites provided they're actually you know good? This shit is well... shit >.> but I guess it's in the name right? you don't put any effort into this you just do it the easy way and shit this out as is... I will never understand why they allow trolls like you and laruffi on here...

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