Hello there, thanks for the translation Fated Circle!
I think I found a few typos here and there
p3 "otak" -> "otaku" p3 "unbotton" -> "unbutton" p4 "The pheromones that you're excreting is [...]": "is" -> "are" p7 last panel: "lowe" -> "lower" p9 second panel: "I-Im at my limit...!": "Im" -> "I'm" p9 last panel: "Nishiumi" -> "Nishizumi" p11 "[...] my jizz in this outageous body!": "outageous" -> "outrageous" p13 "[...] by filing me up with his sperm...!" "filing" -> "filling" p16 "I guess I had a feast of M-chan agan today": "agan" -> "again"
Aaand that's all I could find I guess
If one day you want to update your gallery I hope this can help!