Raw (Hentai-Flix) : https://e-hentai.org/g/569803/876162f113/
Translation, edition : JnTo
Page 004.png translation: HobartFrisbee (Thanks!)

Wasn’t this already translated?

This is one of my ALL TIME BEST FAVORITES

Last edited on 23 August 2018, 18:55.

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I'm grateful for the translation. Although I must say this is one of those works where the cliche by the numbers dialogue actually distracts from the glorious artwork. But that's the fault of the writer, not of the translator of course.

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Still waiting for part 2 ;-;

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A minor nitpick, a single 'dice' as in this, is a 'die'. Dice is plural.

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@sunshineandlolipops
I don't see how it actually distracts from the artwork, it's about as easy to look past as it is to ignore the untranslated dialogue, or any other dialogue for that matter.
It just arguably doesn't add anything - but I wouldn't say it detracts either.

What did you think they might be saying? The progression of the plot is prettty evident from the raws, I don't know what details or curveballs you could have been expecting.
It seems more like you're just trying to put the classic "yo this is a dumb hentai plot/dialogue but I like the art" observation into some other context - like it's somehow more nuanced or insightful that way.

Last edited on 08 June 2019, 08:36.

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The cliffhanger!

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wtf wheres the sequel

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"I come... !" Who the fuck says that? XD. This is one of those translations that is so bad that it's funny. They're lucky that the plot is so light hearted that it disguises the bad translation and makes it endearing. The actual plot is pretty fun with various sex games for the group and good art, but it ends abruptly.

Art 7. Plot 7. Sexiness 7. Translation 4. All out of 10.

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