So while back I created a mummification style bondage base for the MMD software and not to long after I created a fantasy scene with the models, which later turned into a 5 Minute animated scene.

https://ecchi.iwara.tv/videos/z2vkjf4qyefkb4y8e -or- https://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php?viewkey=ph5b7e08774e739

https://youtu.be/y2weNM4JtME

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i just think this is foot fetish of btern =))

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What the fuck did I ……

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lol lollol

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Quite a bunch of typos but that's actually pretty nice. Might be better with soft subs and soft audio track if that's an option. (This way, people won't "hate" you for poor grammar if they can hide it.)

Quick QC:
00:22 - Your (possessive) != you're (contracted form of you are/were) You're probably wondering what the hell is going on here, and why you're mummified.
00:28 - Well, to put it simply... (optional punctation addition, "rushing" doesn't always get you grammar boos but a comma helps here.)
00:39 - But, before we start, I must say [remove comma] Defoko and Rin did an amazing job wrapping you three up for me. (Misplaced punctuation, this one kind of affects the flow of the sentence.)
00:48 - Bon appétit (Optional. It's the correct way to say it in French, and you might have had a reason to capitalize both words. If that isn't the case, well, you know what to do.)
00:55 - Now, let's begin. Being a slave [remove comma] means you'll be worshipping the feet I use to walk this earth.
00:57 - But, before that, you three can begin to enjoy the taste of my feet. ("first" instead of "before this/that" is another option; "before" on its own sounds a bit weird, and the comma is mandatory.)
01:03 - You need to get accustomed to the smell of them first. (Past participle. Looking back at it, first would now sound redundant, so before this/that definitely is preferred above.)
01:10 - Now, which one of you will be the first to get a scent of these beauties? (It's a question. Please don't become the new CGRascal and misuse end-sentence punctuation! Sorry CGR, lol.)
01:21 - I bet my feel smell really bad. (That's your call here, exclamation mark or full stop -- alternately, to hint the viewer you're planning to add the rest of the sentence right after that, you can do what I did and add one or a couple hyphens, but no capitalization if you do this.)
01:37 - Gumi, looks like you want some of my feet too? (That was probably overlooked.)
01:47 - Come on, take a deep breath, you two. (Optional.)
01:54 - Okay, that's enough for now, Miku. It's time for Gumi to have a chance to experience both of my feet. ("It's time... had" is more or less a valid construct but sounds a bit iffy. "Time" also works, of course.)
02:08 - We're in Foot Heaven, Miss Ruko.
02:13 - You know... I think it's time I give some feet to Teto. (Punctuation required. Your call - ellipsis, hyphen, comma, they all work, but you need to split.)
02:22 - So cute, think you can escape my feet? (If she's about to ask a question, think - as in "do you think" - works better than "thinking", which is better followed by, say, an ellipsis...)
02:30 - Sigh... It's definitely not gonna be easy having five slaves and only one pair of feet. (Diffidently is out of place here. The construct is odd, but whatever works for you.)
02:37 - I'll have to manage somehow. Hee-hee. ("manage it" sounds weird and "somehow" is a single word. Also, punctuation.)
03:00 - you're forgetting to think
03:15 - Oh, let's not forget you, Gumi. (Capitalization probably was accidental.)
03:45 - Mmm... It does seem like you three are a lot tougher to break than I originally thought. ("a lot" and "than")
(Skipping the next construct - "Well, luckily" is what I would go with)
04:18 - plaything (single word)
04:31 - Hee-hee... You think giving me that sad look [drop comma] is gonna make me stop?
04:51 - (Laughing loudly) - optional.

Probably missed a few but that should be most of them.

(Please don't upvote as I'm trying to get out of this damn rating&reviewing toplist! Downvoting won't help either as negative points do not happen, but hey, it's your decision... Also, please don't credit the QC, thanks.)

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43883​ - appreciate you doing a heavy spell check on this, I suffer from bad grammer so I knew there where gonna be a couple of mistakes. Not getting any complaints about it on Pornhub or Iwara, so might not fix this, because this was something I did in my free time, and I got other things to work on, but who knows.'

It's kind of funny, it's only on this site that this gallery isn't getting good reception, guess it's just not a fetish most people find or expect on this site compared to the others.

Last edited on 10 September 2018, 23:36.

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