translation japanesse to englisn engoing.

Base +3, fatman4 -7, Elitefire -6, DeltaD36 -6, somedude1234symbols -5, Elgatto12345 -4, Sanest-J9 -5, Koutah -11, dj756 -6

>engoing

please stop

Base +6, Healf Walker +6, BFBK +6, Darworth +6, E6300 +12, ioctl +7, MagicalJuko +6, Elitefire +6, Alpha_L4gger +5, Elgatto12345 +4, Sanest-J9 +5, Koutah +11, KingSinzeo +7

why do you want me to stop

Base +3, fatman4 -7, somedude1234symbols -5, Elgatto12345 -4, Koutah -11, dj756 -6

https://e-hentai.org/g/933320/b09033e848/ raw / original
https://e-hentai.org/g/951479/72af089db2/ Korean

Awesome, thanks a lot for the effort, I'll be looking forward to more :)

Base +42

This is pure comedy gold

Base +6, somedude1234symbols -5, Elgatto12345 -4, dj756 -6

Why does it sound so weird? I might be wrong, but I think there's something wrong with the translations

Base +5

There’s actual translation available on Danbooru. Use that instead of google trans
And learn to typeset properly

Base +13, Darworth +6, fatman4 +7, Elitefire +6, somedude1234symbols +5, Koutah +11, dj756 +6, CyberZero +10

There are a lot of issues with this translation. English is clearly not the first language of whoever translated this, be it you or Google. The most obvious flaws are:

Top panel: The last box is the only one that makes any sense, and "loyalty" should be together as one line. Also, her name is "Sakuya," so there's no reason you should have translated it as "Saki-san." You also left the words outside the boxes and bubble completely untranslated.
Second panel: Her name is "Sagume," and she's a woman, so "Mr. Sagme" is just plain wrong.
Third panel: It might be a direct translation, but that's precisely why you need to change it. Direct translations never sound natural simply because of the differences in Japanese and English sentence structure.
Fourth panel: Again, translation makes no sense at all.
Fifth panel: Weird that you would put "congratulation" (presumably supposed to be "congratulations" but with the "s" covered by the sign) when there aren't any words in that space to begin with, to say nothing of leaving all the Japanese that's actually there untranslated.

I do respect that you have and likely continue to put a lot of work into translating and editing this doujin, and it takes a lotta courage to post your drafts/final works online. Users on Danbooru have already translated this work, so don't be afraid to use their translation, either word-for-word or just to check to see how close your translation is to theirs. Even if you're just translating this for fun, practice, or self-improvement, it's still really important to get the basics right, especially character names. Again, their names are Sakuya Izayoi and Sagume Kishin, which you really need to get right.

Don't be afraid to keep trying, but you really should make sure to check your work for quality and maybe get some help with things you're not 100% on.

Base +7, fatman4 +7, ExDragonMaster +7, E6300 +12, Mungorn +6, Darworth +6, MagicalJuko +6, Elitefire +6, powa01 +13, somedude1234symbols +5, Alpha_L4gger +5, ericult +6, Elgatto12345 +4, and 4 more...

je veux le suprimer et cela ne marche pas

Base +3, Elitefire -6, somedude1234symbols -5, Koutah -11, dj756 -6, elgringo -40, CyberZero -10

火鸟的美铃×大小姐超级好吃(๑´ڡ`๑)

Base +6

If you don't understand English or Japanese, maybe don't post your Japanese to English translations.....

Base +6, Koutah +11, dj756 +6, CyberZero +10