This is actually pretty good, by Sonic Rule 34 standards.

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Whoa, what’s with the line work on page 51?

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This is fucking horrifying.

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Storywise, really good. It was a well executed plan, and gave room for some rule 34+63 action for just raw sex and mass fucking. Sonic's fucking deactivating the helmets being a happy mistake was an interesting plot twist, more so when Tails confirmed it as such as well.

It gave me some feels for Metal because I can understand from an outside perspective. He was originally made to be Sonic, but better and work for Eggman. He's the fourth generation of a metal-type Sonic, the only one to have matched him in speed and overcome him in power, but only to lose to him constantly.

It's like having an older brother who does well in school and is popular and is a star varsity athlete where you now have his shadow to fall into, and are getting by on B's and C's. "Why can't you be more like your brother? He does X Y Z and here you are screwing around at home when you could be like him and studying." That kinda thing. Metal is always fighting Sonic, whether it's to actually kill him or to just be BETTER than him yet he always fails. He was made in someone's image and made better than them in every way, only to lose every time. It's pretty damn emotionally scarring to someone.

Art is really well done and while I can also question the line work on 51 as well, I think there was some sort of issue with the downloading/uploading or resolution scaling. It's not consistent with the current art so it's a fluke of some sort. The other characters themselves don't have that much interesting going about them, except Brun in my eyes. I expected him to be "the big dumb one", but he was more like the "big Russian one that everyone is scared of", even if he comes off as a little slow.

Overall so far, pretty good. I like happy endings, but I also like bad endings where the hero falls to the dark side. The path this is going, I'm hoping to have Metal come back and be rebuilt by Tails as a mercy. It'd not be as a "good guy", but to live and continue his life to try and be better than Sonic without the concern of "death" after fulfilling this and still being himself. The change in character like that would more or less be a character death imo.

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@Tess Verres Hey! Thank you so much for the in-depth analysis, and I'm glad you liked the comic. I didn't expect such a lovely tone in here of all places. Thank you, also thank you @RabidTanker as well, I'm really honored that you guys think so highly of this story and art! It's my first massive comic project and I think I've made many errors everywhere but I'm glad you think it's competent. Speaking of which:

Page 51 had a scaling algorithm error that I for some reason didn't bother to properly fix. Since this comic gets constantly stolen from my Patreon by magarey who keeps coming with new accounts that I keep blocking, there's a chance that it might or might not be fixed in this collection. I'll go fix it on my Patreon now, though!

https://www.patreon.com/MissPhase Ahem.

Last edited on 02 January 2019, 14:46.

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