You need proofreaders. Other than that, nice work.

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@ Quess Paraya

i know need a proof reader! you posted one of it in one of my previous work, but problem is i dont have one. im trying to build up a team here(locally) but i dont have the cash or trust to give them that...

if you want to you can pm me if your interested, but just to let you know i don't have cash to give you for this...

also, i think Filipinos dont kneed correct wordings of every thing. we survived the txt era up to now.( and even have a grammar deficiency for that) i think other Filipinos can still survive for wrong grammars as long as they can still understand it

so i probably wont bee needing one for the time being.... im just doing this for a hobby so no hard feelings...

Last edited on 12 September 2018, 01:17.

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@fire_gold pwede akong makatulong

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